[AGM-1944] update AGVPN for iOS section #161
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| 1. Next, in the search bar, start typing *"AdGuard"* and select *"adguard vpn"* from the list of suggested options. | ||
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| 1. Select *AdGuard VPN - Unlimited & Fast* from the list of suggested apps and tap *Download*. If necessary, enter your Apple ID account password in the opened window. | ||
| 1. Select *AdGuard VPN - Unlimited & Fast* from the list of suggested apps and tap *GET*. If necessary, enter your Apple ID account password in the opened window. | ||
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не очень круто что тут Open а не Get, но в целом не критично
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не оч понял ты о чем
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а, типа на скрине
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ну переставил скрин ниже, теперь совсем норм
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| 1. Wait for the download to finish and tap *Open*. | ||
| 1. Wait for the download to finish and for *OPEN* button to appear. |
docs/adguard-vpn-for-ios/overview.md
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| ### Import/export exclusions | ||
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| Another useful feature is the import/export of exclusion lists. This way you can import/share exclusion lists from/to other devices. |
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трудно слеши читаются, лучше переформулировать
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| ### Operating mode | ||
| DNS servers translate a domain name or hostname (e.g., example.com or www.example.com) into something browsers can understand, i.e. IP addresses. AdGuard VPN for iOS offers a choice between several DNS servers, each with their own special qualities. For example, AdGuard DNS removes ads and protects your device from tracking while AdGuard DNS Family Protection combines the functions of AdGuard DNS with Safe search and adult content blocking. DNS servers by different DNS providers may also work faster or slower depending on your location, ISP, and other factors. Choose the one that works best for you. You can [find out more about DNS](https://adguard-dns.io/kb/general/dns-filtering/#what-is-dns) and its characteristics. |
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ты уверен что это здесь нужно?
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вполне, за исключением разве что первого предложения. а так довольно полезно объяснить доп функционал который не является ВПНом
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| You can choose system default, dark or light theme of the app (available in iOS 13 and later versions). | ||
| This option helps provide infromation to our support, to help identify and fix various problems you might encounter. |
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- предлагаю не писать various problems, не настраивать юзера на то, что он встретит кучу багов
- а как помогает и что делать дальше?
- два раза help
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случайно нажала Start a review, но в целом так даже лучше...
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| #### Dignostic data | ||
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| Technical information that can be useful in solving technical problems and is sometimes requested by our support and developers. |
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везде полное предложение, а здесь нет
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| >If for some reason it is more convenient for you to send us logs in another way, you can export them yourself. To do this, select *Export logs* in the *Support* section. | ||
| >If for some reason it is more convenient for you to send us logs in another way, you can export them yourself. |
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тот же коммент про оформление
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не понял, какой тот же
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