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`<destination>` -> `<stopovers>` in a mission dialog.
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"Diamond Grey"
"Grey Wolf"
` "The Grey Goose."`
` He stops and frowns. "Look at me, rambling like an ol' man. Ser, Captain, I'd like to pay you <payment> to take me home, to <destination>."`
` He smiles sadly. "Skaldgar always had a nose for good folks. Anyways, he told me he had a nephew named Helm who worked at the Norn spaceport. Find 'im and he can get'cha and this stone where it needs to go." The young man than looks you in the eye and gives a slow respectful nod, "For Ol' Skaldgar, may he be findin' ore in hel."`
` Cygnet strokes his mustache. "Tod Copper. Tod Copper. Tell you what, that name doesn' ring a bell. Heck, I don' even keep track of names 'less I get someone impor'ant. If ya lookin' for someone in particular to buy, can I get a description?"`
goto shotdown
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"oder"
" Grat"
` "Fantastic, you understand the situation," she says, though her tone is much more businesslike than the wording would imply. "In that case, if you could please take this to Earth and communicate with your various governments we can begin a dialogue on how best to deal with this current scenario."`
` "Hello, ser! I hope you've been enjoying your stay in our state of the art spaceport! But why stay cooped up in here, when you could be out there?" She gestures toward the windows.`
` "So ser," she continues, "what do you say? Should I sign you up for the VIP Winter-Wonder Excursion Package for a special time limited-only offer of 2,000 credits?"`
` The woman frowns, but nods knowingly. "I am afraid, ser, most seem to think the way you do. Still, if you ever run into anyone out there who might be interested, let them know. We could really use the work." With that, she turns and walks briskly back to her booth.`
` The woman's face lights up, and you get the sense that she isn't used to hearing "yes" very often. "Oh, that is wonderful ser, just wonderful!"`
` She puts her finger to her ear and says, "Hjlod, we have a customer! Get the crawler warmed up!" The woman then drops her hand and waves to you. "Right this way, ser! And might I add - you will not be disappointed." She chatters excitedly about the cultural, artistic and scientific merits of the trip as she leads you toward a large pressure hatch.`
` The woman's face, red with the cold, looks crest-fallen, but unsurprised, like she was half expecting this outcome. "Brunhilda can be an... intimidating vehicle, it's true. But she is safe ser, I assure you. Either way, I'll take you back to the spaceport."`
` The uneventful journey to the boiling ice river of Slidr is suddenly interrupted when a deep tremor followed by a thunderous boom shakes the Ice-Crawler to its core and causes it to slip on the disturbed ice and snow. Somewhere outside, subsequent rumble starts to build rapidly. After Hjlod regains control of the crawler, she immediately veers away from the noise. "That vas Nifel-quake, and loud noise was avalanche, or landslide, maybe both. This is not good."`
` By the time you are on your feet, Hjlod has already gathered up numerous supplies and is preparing to open the hatch and dig her way to the surface. She looks at you. "Nothing to vorry about. Happens all time. Vell, not really. First time this happen, but Hjlod not let you die, probably. I can lead us to settlement not far from here."`
` Hjlod abruptly stops and glares at you. "You are fool. You vill certainly die, and you endanger me in process. This is no game, valk only vhere I valk or die."`
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` Hjlod nods. "Hrithfjall sounds like good place. I vill tell Ondurdis.`
` Hjlod nods. "The Skadenga have alvays been guides, pathfinders. I vill tell Ondurdis.`
` "Vhen you were gone, thing, or assembly, vas held. Ondurdis called in all Skadenga from all villages across Nifel. You must find transportation for 2,200 folk. That is what Onderduis told me to tell you."`
` Hjlod takes a deep, calming breath. "I call because you are our only hope. They vill not let us leave. They vill not let us be. They will steal our souls." She points a shaky finger at you. "Take us back to Nifel. All those who are left. Take us home. Ve know the cold vill get us eventually. But better to live on a dying vorld as Skadenga than to live here as nothing."`
` Hjlod takes a deep, calming breath. "I call because you are our only hope. They vill not let us leave. They vill not let us be. They vill steal our souls." She points a shaky finger at you. "Take us back to Nifel. All those who are left. Take us home. Ve know the cold vill get us eventually. But better to live on a dying vorld as Skadenga than to live here as nothing."`
` Hjlod grimaces. "Once they know you are here, they vill collect us. Come back here in an hour. Any longer than that, and ve vill be gone." She slumps down on the ground as you exit the dark, dirty tunnel where the remaining Skadenga cling to their fleeting identity.`
` "Ve have 52 people that need off this vorld right now." Hjlod hesitates a moment, and then adds, "I know how much you like money. Ve have pooled all our savings together and will pay you <payment> for this job." She grabs a ragged duffle bag and a group gather around her. "The rest vill meet us at your ship. Ve move now."`
` "Ve have 52 people that need off this vorld right now." Hjlod hesitates a moment, and then adds, "I know how much you like money. Ve have pooled all our savings together and vill pay you <payment> for this job." She grabs a ragged duffle bag and a group gather around her. "The rest vill meet us at your ship. Ve move now."`
` Hjlod frowns. "It's Arnson's family isn't it? I told him he vas too far."`
` "I do not know vhy you sent us to that place. But I am happy to be home. So go, and maybe one day I vill not hate to see you again."`
`A familiar woman is waiting for you outside your ship. Although it's been more than seven years since you've last seen her, you recognize Hjlod instantly. Her eyes are brighter than when last you parted, and she has the same lopsided grin that you remember. "<first>, I saw your ship landing, and thought I vould say hello."`
` She reaches into her pocket and pulls out a small wooden box, similar to the one you saw displayed at Asgard years ago. "I have been thinking," Hjlod says. "Maybe all this vas vill of Skade. Maybe you took us to Asgard to make us stronger, to make us better. It is bitter lesson, but I understand it now."`
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conversation
`Helheim's spaceport has all the constant hustle and bustle of a boomtown. It's dirty, lively, and packed with workers. As you walk through the spaceport, an aged man in a worn and weathered roustabout jacket waves his arm toward you and approaches you.`
` "You've got the look of one who knows a ship inside and out," he says. "Name's Skaldgar, ain't much for ships; earth, soil, and rock are my domain. But I do got a need to travel." He pauses as a wistful look briefly passes over his face. "I left, you see, decades ago. No goodbye. No note. Just... left. Living with others, taking care of others, hard on a man like me. I like solitude, peace, and work. But now my bones are brittle: the radiation, earth-rot as we call it, has taken hold and my time is running out. And I find, I don't want to be alone anymore."`
` He stops and frowns. "Look at me, rambling like an ol' man. Ser, Captain, I'd like to pay you <payment> to take me home, to <destination>."`
` He stops and frowns. "Look at me, rambling like an ol' man. Captain, I'd like to pay you <payment> to take me home, to <destination>."`
choice
` "If you have coin, I have room."`
` "I guess I can take a small detour."`
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`There is a feeling of deep melancholy in the nearly deserted spaceport. A few plaques adorn the walls, proudly boasting of earlier times when Nifel was a place of relevance in the galactic community. Most are old images of researchers and doctors and their miracle cures.`
` But now this place is a ghost-town, and you walk its empty halls unsure of why you even bothered to explore it in the first place.`
` You turn a corner and find a woman standing near a booth with blown up images of ice-covered scenery. She waves at you excitedly.`
` "Hello, ser! I hope you've been enjoying your stay in our state of the art spaceport! But why stay cooped up in here, when you could be out there?" She gestures toward the windows.`
` "Hello, Captain! I hope you've been enjoying your stay in our state of the art spaceport! But why stay cooped up in here, when you could be out there?" She gestures toward the windows.`
` "Explore the breath-taking Glaesisvellir ice-plains, or the boiling Slidr river. We'll even take you to the Hrimbrimr valley where the famous Rigellian cure was discovered!`
` "So ser," she continues, "what do you say? Should I sign you up for the VIP Winter-Wonder Excursion Package for a special time limited-only offer of 2,000 credits?"`
` "So Captain," she continues, "what do you say? Should I sign you up for the VIP Winter-Wonder Excursion Package for a special time limited-only offer of 2,000 credits?"`
choice
` "Sure, I'd love to see more of this world."`
goto excursion
` "No, uh, thanks. Freezing to death in the frigid tundra doesn't sound like a good time to me."`
` The woman frowns, but nods knowingly. "I am afraid, ser, most seem to think the way you do. Still, if you ever run into anyone out there who might be interested, let them know. We could really use the work." With that, she turns and walks briskly back to her booth.`
` The woman frowns, but nods knowingly. "I am afraid, Captain, most seem to think the way you do. Still, if you ever run into anyone out there who might be interested, let them know. We could really use the work." With that, she turns and walks briskly back to her booth.`
decline
label excursion
action
payment -2000
` The woman's face lights up, and you get the sense that she isn't used to hearing "yes" very often. "Oh, that is wonderful ser, just wonderful!"`
` She puts her finger to her ear and says, "Hjlod, we have a customer! Get the crawler warmed up!" The woman then drops her hand and waves to you. "Right this way, ser! And might I add - you will not be disappointed." She chatters excitedly about the cultural, artistic and scientific merits of the trip as she leads you toward a large pressure hatch.`
` The woman's face lights up, and you get the sense that she isn't used to hearing "yes" very often. "Oh, that is wonderful Captain, just wonderful!"`
` She puts her finger to her ear and says, "Hjlod, we have a customer! Get the crawler warmed up!" The woman then drops her hand and waves to you. "Right this way, Captain! And might I add - you will not be disappointed." She chatters excitedly about the cultural, artistic and scientific merits of the trip as she leads you toward a large pressure hatch.`
` She hits a switch and the hatch opens; she then escorts you into a frigid maintenance dock. A loud, ugly vehicle is whirring at the center of a mess of broken and discarded parts. "There she is!" The woman is nearly shouting as she speaks over the mechanical hum. "We call her Brunhilda, the Queen of the Ice, a most.. durable vehicle, capable of giving you an authentic ice-explorer experience!"`
` The Ice-Crawler, Brunhilda, looks less than dependable to you. It appears to be a run-down, mishmash of parts and jury-rigged technology forced onto a three century old Ice-Crawler, probably used by the original colonists.`
choice
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` (Key my signature.)`
goto yolo
` "I've changed my mind. I am going to pass on this excursion."`
` The woman's face, red with the cold, looks crest-fallen, but unsurprised, like she was half expecting this outcome. "Brunhilda can be an... intimidating vehicle, it's true. But she is safe ser, I assure you. Either way, I'll take you back to the spaceport."`
` The woman's face, red with the cold, looks crest-fallen, but unsurprised, like she was half expecting this outcome. "Brunhilda can be an... intimidating vehicle, it's true. But she is safe Captain, I assure you. Either way, I'll take you back to the spaceport."`
` With that, you follow the woman back to the warm and nearly empty spaceport, where she leaves you to return to her forlorn booth.`
decline
label yolo
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` "What do you want from me?"`
` "Who are these people?"`
goto who
` Hjlod glares at you. "From you? Everything. For that is what you took from us.`
` Hjlod glares at you. "From you? Everything. For that is vhat you took from us.`
` "I do not know vhy you did it. Vhy you brought us here. If Skade really let us down. Or if you ignored her," she growls. "But it does not matter. All that matters is that ve leave, and that is vhy ve need you."`
goto here
label who
` Hjlod laughs and tears run down her cheeks. "Do you not recognize us? Our great savior? Ve are the Skadenga, and this is your handivwork."`
` She look away from you and continues. "The rest are not dead, no. But they have left us. Most are happy; happy to be fed, happy to be entertained, happy to forget vho they are, happy to be Skadenga in name, but not in practice. But those here cannot accept that. Ve refuse to become them.`
` She looks away from you and continues. "The rest are not dead, no. But they have left us. Most are happy; happy to be fed, happy to be entertained, happy to forget who they are, happy to be Skadenga in name, but not in practice. But those here cannot accept that. Ve refuse to become them.`
` "Ve hide now. From the social workers, from the service providers, from the government. They can still find us, they know ve are here, but vhat they don't know is that ve can leave. That you can take us avay from here."`
label here
` Hjlod takes a deep, calming breath. "I call because you are our only hope. They vill not let us leave. They vill not let us be. They will steal our souls." She points a shaky finger at you. "Take us back to Nifel. All those who are left. Take us home. Ve know the cold vill get us eventually. But better to live on a dying vorld as Skadenga than to live here as nothing."`
` Hjlod takes a deep, calming breath. "I call because you are our only hope. They vill not let us leave. They vill not let us be. They vill steal our souls." She points a shaky finger at you. "Take us back to Nifel. All those who are left. Take us home. Ve know the cold vill get us eventually. But better to live on a dying vorld as Skadenga than to live here as nothing."`
choice
` "I will help you."`
goto help
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` You return to Hjlod, who is surprised that you came back at all, and let her know that you going to help them.`
label help
` Hearing this, the slumped and depressed dredges in the hall stir and rise from their stupor. Hurriedly, some gather items while others race off further into the dark, unused parts of the spaceport.`
` "Ve have 52 people that need off this vorld right now." Hjlod hesitates a moment, and then adds, "I know how much you like money. Ve have pooled all our savings together and will pay you <payment> for this job." She grabs a ragged duffle bag and a group gather around her. "The rest vill meet us at your ship. Ve move now."`
` "Ve have 52 people that need off this vorld right now." Hjlod hesitates a moment, and then adds, "I know how much you like money. Ve have pooled all our savings together and vill pay you <payment> for this job." She grabs a ragged duffle bag and a group gather around her. "The rest vill meet us at your ship. Ve move now."`
choice
` (Follow Hjlod.)`
` Once you're back in the operational spaceport, you and your group move quickly, while drawing occasional glances from curious on-lookers. A large group of disheveled Skaldenga are waiting for you when you reach your ship. "Everyone on, quickly!" Hjlod barks at her people.`
` A few moments later, they are all on board. "Asdis, headcount!" Hjlod orders. As you're waiting, two more dirty and gaunt Skadenga show up. Asdis adds them to her count and then addresses Hjlod. "Ondurdis, 48 total."`
` Hjlod frowns. "It's Arnson's family isn't it? I told him he was too far."`
` Hjlod frowns. "It's Arnson's family isn't it? I told him he vas too far."`
` A commotion boils up from a few terminals down, and you see some civil servants and local police officers heading your way. Asdis is also watching. "They could still be coming."`
` "It's too late for them." Hjlod shuts the hatch. "<first>, if ever ve vere friends. Take off, now."`
choice
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has "Stones of Skadenga 1: done"
on offer
dialog
`A group of eight Skadenga approach you. They ask if you'd be willing to take them to <destination> so that they can return their loved-one's stones to their Family-Cairns, offering <payment> for their transportation.`
`A group of eight Skadenga approach you. They ask if you'd be willing to take them to <stopovers> so that they can return their loved-one's stones to their Family-Cairns, offering <payment> for their transportation.`
on stopover
dialog
`The eight Skadenga solmenly make their way off your ship and into the icy lands of Nifel. After a few hours they return, cold, and eager to return home to Windblaine.`
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