CLDR-17830 BRS Alpha release page 2

Small updates from TC meeting.

docs/site/downloads/cldr-46.md

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Count | Level | Usage | Examples
 | 📈 | Basic | Ewe, Ga, Kinyarwanda, Konkani (Latin), Northern Sotho, Oromo, Sichuan Yi, Southern Sotho, Tswana |
 | 📉 | Basic* | Chuvash, Anii |
 
-\* Note: Above Basic, the ‘bar’ raises for each release. So locales without active contributors may backslide.
+\* Note: Each release, the number of items needed for Modern and Moderate increases. So locales without active contributors may drop down in coverage level.
 
 For a full listing, see [Coverage Levels](https://unicode.org/cldr/charts/46/supplemental/locale_coverage.html)
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ For a full listing, see [Delta DTDs](https://unicode.org/cldr/charts/46/suppleme
 1. Currency. New currency code ZWG added — because it was late in the cycle, many locales will just support the code.
 **TBD**
 2. Timezones.
-    1. Changed Kazakhstan to reflect removal of Asia/Almaty
+    1. Changed the metazone for Kazakhstan to reflect removal of Asia/Almaty, thus dropping the distinction among different regions in Kazakhstan.
 	2. Deprecated timezone ids. Altered the handling of: CST6CDT, EST, EST5EDT, MST7MDT, PST8PDT
 3. Units
     1. Added units: portion-per-1e9 (aka per-billion), night (for hotel stays), light (as a prefix for light-second, light-minute, etc.)
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ For a full listing, see [¤¤BCP47 Delta](https://unicode.org/cldr/charts/46/del
 	3. Revision of many search keywords to break up phrases
 2. Major changes to Chinese collation, reflecting new data in Unicode 16.0
 3. Other changes
-    a. Locales also had smaller improvements agreed to by translators.
+    1. Locales also had smaller improvements agreed to by translators.
 **TBD**
 
 For a full listing, see [Delta Data](https://unicode.org/cldr/charts/46/delta/index.html)