CLDR-17505 Further tweaks

unicode-org · Sep 13, 2024 · 4508db9 · 4508db9
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@@ -1932,7 +1932,7 @@ The following describes in more detail how to determine the exact inheritance of
 
 #### <a name="Definitions" href="#Definitions">Definitions</a>
 
-_Ordered_ elements are those whose sequence in the XML file is important; that is, reversing the order of those elements makes a difference in the interpretation of the data. These are marked with the `@ORDRED` annotation in the dtd file. For example, consider the following in `ldmlSupplemental.dtd`:
+_Ordered_ elements are those whose sequence in the XML file is important; that is, changing the order of those elements can make a difference in the interpretation of the data. These are marked with the `@ORDRED` annotation in the dtd file. For example, consider the following in `ldmlSupplemental.dtd`:
 ```
 <!ELEMENT languageMatch EMPTY >
     <!--@ORDERED-->
@@ -1944,9 +1944,9 @@ In the file `languageInfo.xml`, we find the following.
 <!-- default script mismatch distance -->
 <languageMatch desired="*_*"	supported="*_*"	distance="50"/>	<!-- *; * ⇒ *; * -->
 ```
-The ordering among the languageMatch items is important, because the `*_*` must only be matched _after_ all the explicit scripts have been.
+The ordering among the `languageMatch` items is important, because the `*_*` must only be matched _after_ all the explicit scripts have been.
 
-The ordered elements also _block_ inheritance in files governed by ldml.dtd. That is, because the elements are ordered, there is no way to tell where an inherited element from a parent locale would be in that sequence.
+The ordered elements also _block_ inheritance in files governed by `ldml.dtd`. That is, because the elements are ordered, there is no way to tell where an inherited element from a parent locale would be in that sequence.
 
 Attributes that serve to distinguish multiple elements at the same level are called _distinguishing_ attributes. For example, the `type` attribute distinguishes different elements in lists of translations, such as: