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   <h2>Register</h2>
 
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-    Registrations will be sent out to those on the waiting list in August 2015 (<a href="#waitlist">add your name to the waitlist here</a>). Funded places in this event are limited and first-in first-served so please add yourself to the waitlist as early as possible. It's ok to fine-tune parts of registration later e.g. changing the exact number of nights you'll be staying, contact <a href="mailto:[email protected]">Jack Morgan</a> if you need to change your registration.
+    Registrations will be sent out to those on the waiting list in August 2015 (<a href="#waitlist">add your name to the waitlist here</a>). Funded places in this event are limited and are offered on a first-in first-served basis so please add yourself to the waitlist as early as possible. It's ok to fine-tune parts of registration later e.g. changing the exact number of nights you'll be staying, contact <a href="mailto:[email protected]">Jack Morgan</a> if you need to change your registration.
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