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Update the installation for Hailo-8L to help readability.

docs/docs/frigate/installation.md

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-### Hailo-8l
+### Hailo-8L
 
-The Hailo-8l comes as a M.2 card usally connected to a carrier board used for PCIe, that connects to the Raspberry Pi 5 as part of the AI Kit. 
-But it can also be used on other boards that have the M.2 M key edge connector.
+The Hailo-8L is an M.2 card typically connected to a carrier board for PCIe, which then connects to the Raspberry Pi 5 as part of the AI Kit. However, it can also be used on other boards equipped with an M.2 M key edge connector.
 
 #### Installation 
 
-If you are using the Raspberry Pi 5 with AI Kit the installation will be much easier as you can folow this [Guide](https://www.raspberrypi.com/documentation/accessories/ai-kit.html#ai-kit-installation) to install the driver and software.
+For Raspberry Pi 5 users with the AI Kit, installation is straightforward. Simply follow this [guide](https://www.raspberrypi.com/documentation/accessories/ai-kit.html#ai-kit-installation) to install the driver and software.
 
-If you are using other board the installtion is as folows, we will start by installing the driver from the github repository Hailo provides, I have put together a handy script for linux, to clone the repository, build the driver and install it. copy or download [this](https://gist.github.com/spanner3003/4b85751d671d4ac55f926e564f1abc3e#file-install_hailo8l_driver-sh) which ever you prefer, make sue it has execution permistions with `sudo chmod +e install_hailo_driver.sh` and run it with `./install_hailo_driver.sh`.
+For other boards, follow these steps for installation:
+
+1. Install the driver from the Hailo GitHub repository. A convenient script for Linux is available to clone the repository, build the driver, and install it.
+2. Copy or download [this script](https://gist.github.com/spanner3003/4b85751d671d4ac55f926e564f1abc3e#file-install_hailo8l_driver-sh).
+3. Ensure it has execution permissions with `sudo chmod +x install_hailo_driver.sh`.
+4. Run the script with `./install_hailo_driver.sh`.
 
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