update original

rustbook-en/packages/tools/src/bin/link2print.rs

@@ -46,27 +46,11 @@ fn parse_references(buffer: String) -> (String, HashMap<String, String>) {
 fn parse_links((buffer, ref_map): (String, HashMap<String, String>)) -> String {
     // FIXME: check which punctuation is allowed by spec.
     let re = Regex::new(r###"(?:(?P<pre>(?:```(?:[^`]|`[^`])*`?\n```\n)|(?:[^\[]`[^`\n]+[\n]?[^`\n]*`))|(?:\[(?P<name>[^]]+)\](?:(?:\([[:blank:]]*(?P<val>[^")]*[^ ])(?:[[:blank:]]*"[^"]*")?\))|(?:\[(?P<key>[^]]*)\]))?))"###).expect("could not create regex");
-    let error_code =
-        Regex::new(r###"^E\d{4}$"###).expect("could not create regex");
     let output = re.replace_all(&buffer, |caps: &Captures<'_>| {
         match caps.name("pre") {
             Some(pre_section) => pre_section.as_str().to_string(),
             None => {
                 let name = caps.name("name").expect("could not get name").as_str();
-                // Really we should ignore text inside code blocks,
-                // this is a hack to not try to treat `#[derive()]`,
-                // `[profile]`, `[test]`, or `[E\d\d\d\d]` like a link.
-                if name.starts_with("derive(") ||
-                   name.starts_with("profile") ||
-                   name.starts_with("test") ||
-                   name.starts_with("no_mangle") ||
-                   name.starts_with("cfg") ||
-                   name.starts_with("unoptimized") ||
-                   name.starts_with("ignore") ||
-                   name.starts_with("should_panic") ||
-                   error_code.is_match(name) {
-                    return format!("[{name}]")
-                }
 
                 let val = match caps.name("val") {
                     // `[name](link)`
@@ -81,8 +65,10 @@ fn parse_links((buffer, ref_map): (String, HashMap<String, String>)) -> String {
                                     _ => ref_map.get(&key.as_str().to_uppercase()).unwrap_or_else(|| panic!("could not find url for the link text `{}`", key.as_str())).to_string(),
                                 }
                             }
-                            // `[name]` as reference
-                            None => ref_map.get(&name.to_uppercase()).unwrap_or_else(|| panic!("could not find url for the link text `{name}`")).to_string(),
+                            // `[name]` is within code and should not be treated as a link
+                            None => {
+                                return format!("[{name}]");
+                            }
                         }
                     }
                 };
@@ -236,11 +222,11 @@ more text"
     }
 
     #[test]
-    fn parses_link_without_reference_as_reference() {
+    fn does_not_parse_link_without_reference_as_reference() {
         let source = r"[link] is alone
 [link]: The contents"
             .to_string();
-        let target = r"link at *The contents* is alone".to_string();
+        let target = r"[link] is alone".to_string();
         assert_eq!(parse(source), target);
     }
 
@@ -294,7 +280,7 @@ version = "0.1.0"
 
 [dependencies]
 ```
-Another [link]
+Another [link][]
 more text
 [link]: http://gohere
 "###

rustbook-en/src/ch12-00-an-io-project.md

@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ Along the way, we’ll show how to make our command line tool use the terminal
 features that many other command line tools use. We’ll read the value of an
 environment variable to allow the user to configure the behavior of our tool.
 We’ll also print error messages to the standard error console stream (`stderr`)
-instead of standard output (`stdout`), so, for example, the user can redirect
-successful output to a file while still seeing error messages onscreen.
+instead of standard output (`stdout`) so that, for example, the user can
+redirect successful output to a file while still seeing error messages onscreen.
 
 One Rust community member, Andrew Gallant, has already created a fully
 featured, very fast version of `grep`, called `ripgrep`. By comparison, our
@@ -29,17 +29,15 @@ background knowledge you need to understand a real-world project such as
 
 Our `grep` project will combine a number of concepts you’ve learned so far:
 
-* Organizing code (using what you learned about modules in [Chapter 7][ch7]<!--
-  ignore -->)
-* Using vectors and strings (collections, [Chapter 8][ch8]<!-- ignore -->)
+* Organizing code ([Chapter 7][ch7]<!-- ignore -->)
+* Using vectors and strings ([Chapter 8][ch8]<!-- ignore -->)
 * Handling errors ([Chapter 9][ch9]<!-- ignore -->)
-* Using traits and lifetimes where appropriate ([Chapter 10][ch10]<!-- ignore
-  -->)
+* Using traits and lifetimes where appropriate ([Chapter 10][ch10]<!-- ignore -->)
 * Writing tests ([Chapter 11][ch11]<!-- ignore -->)
 
 We’ll also briefly introduce closures, iterators, and trait objects, which
-Chapters [13][ch13]<!-- ignore --> and [17][ch17]<!-- ignore --> will cover in
-detail.
+[Chapter 13][ch13]<!-- ignore --> and [Chapter 17][ch17]<!-- ignore --> will
+cover in detail.
 
 [ch7]: ch07-00-managing-growing-projects-with-packages-crates-and-modules.html
 [ch8]: ch08-00-common-collections.html

rustbook-en/src/ch12-01-accepting-command-line-arguments.md

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ to turn it into a collection, such as a vector, that contains all the elements
 the iterator produces.
 
 The code in Listing 12-1 allows your `minigrep` program to read any command
-line arguments passed to it and then collect the values into a vector.
+line arguments passed to it, and then collect the values into a vector.
 
 <Listing number="12-1" file-name="src/main.rs" caption="Collecting the command line arguments into a vector and printing them">
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ line arguments passed to it and then collect the values into a vector.
 
 </Listing>
 
-First, we bring the `std::env` module into scope with a `use` statement so we
+First we bring the `std::env` module into scope with a `use` statement so we
 can use its `args` function. Notice that the `std::env::args` function is
 nested in two levels of modules. As we discussed in [Chapter
 7][ch7-idiomatic-use]<!-- ignore -->, in cases where the desired function is
@@ -63,14 +63,14 @@ mistaken for a function that’s defined in the current module.
 > Unicode. If your program needs to accept arguments containing invalid
 > Unicode, use `std::env::args_os` instead. That function returns an iterator
 > that produces `OsString` values instead of `String` values. We’ve chosen to
-> use `std::env::args` here for simplicity, because `OsString` values differ
-> per platform and are more complex to work with than `String` values.
+> use `std::env::args` here for simplicity because `OsString` values differ per
+> platform and are more complex to work with than `String` values.
 
 On the first line of `main`, we call `env::args`, and we immediately use
 `collect` to turn the iterator into a vector containing all the values produced
 by the iterator. We can use the `collect` function to create many kinds of
 collections, so we explicitly annotate the type of `args` to specify that we
-want a vector of strings. Although we very rarely need to annotate types in
+want a vector of strings. Although you very rarely need to annotate types in
 Rust, `collect` is one function you do often need to annotate because Rust
 isn’t able to infer the kind of collection you want.
 
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ Notice that the first value in the vector is `"target/debug/minigrep"`, which
 is the name of our binary. This matches the behavior of the arguments list in
 C, letting programs use the name by which they were invoked in their execution.
 It’s often convenient to have access to the program name in case you want to
-print it in messages or change behavior of the program based on what command
-line alias was used to invoke the program. But for the purposes of this
+print it in messages or change the behavior of the program based on what
+command line alias was used to invoke the program. But for the purposes of this
 chapter, we’ll ignore it and save only the two arguments we need.
 
 ### Saving the Argument Values in Variables
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ we can use the values throughout the rest of the program. We do that in Listing
 </Listing>
 
 As we saw when we printed the vector, the program’s name takes up the first
-value in the vector at `args[0]`, so we’re starting arguments at index `1`. The
+value in the vector at `args[0]`, so we’re starting arguments at index 1. The
 first argument `minigrep` takes is the string we’re searching for, so we put a
 reference to the first argument in the variable `query`. The second argument
 will be the file path, so we put a reference to the second argument in the

rustbook-en/src/ch12-02-reading-a-file.md

@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 ## Reading a File
 
 Now we’ll add functionality to read the file specified in the `file_path`
-argument. First, we need a sample file to test it with: we’ll use a file with a
+argument. First we need a sample file to test it with: we’ll use a file with a
 small amount of text over multiple lines with some repeated words. Listing 12-3
 has an Emily Dickinson poem that will work well! Create a file called
 *poem.txt* at the root level of your project, and enter the poem “I’m Nobody!
 Who are you?”
 
-<Listing number="12-3" file-name="poem.txt" caption="A poem by Emily Dickinson makes a good test case">
+<Listing number="12-3" file-name="poem.txt" caption="A poem by Emily Dickinson makes a good test case.">
 
 ```text
 {{#include ../listings/ch12-an-io-project/listing-12-03/poem.txt}}
@@ -26,11 +26,12 @@ shown in Listing 12-4.
 
 </Listing>
 
-First, we bring in a relevant part of the standard library with a `use`
+First we bring in a relevant part of the standard library with a `use`
 statement: we need `std::fs` to handle files.
 
 In `main`, the new statement `fs::read_to_string` takes the `file_path`, opens
-that file, and returns a `std::io::Result<String>` of the file’s contents.
+that file, and returns a value of type `std::io::Result<String>` that contains
+the file’s contents.
 
 After that, we again add a temporary `println!` statement that prints the value
 of `contents` after the file is read, so we can check that the program is
@@ -50,6 +51,6 @@ responsibilities: generally, functions are clearer and easier to maintain if
 each function is responsible for only one idea. The other problem is that we’re
 not handling errors as well as we could. The program is still small, so these
 flaws aren’t a big problem, but as the program grows, it will be harder to fix
-them cleanly. It’s good practice to begin refactoring early on when developing
-a program, because it’s much easier to refactor smaller amounts of code. We’ll
-do that next.
+them cleanly. It’s a good practice to begin refactoring early on when
+developing a program because it’s much easier to refactor smaller amounts of
+code. We’ll do that next.

rustbook-en/src/ch12-03-improving-error-handling-and-modularity.md

@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ community has developed guidelines for splitting the separate concerns of a
 binary program when `main` starts getting large. This process has the following
 steps:
 
-* Split your program into a *main.rs* and a *lib.rs* and move your program’s
-  logic to *lib.rs*.
+* Split your program into a *main.rs* file and a *lib.rs* file and move your
+  program’s logic to *lib.rs*.
 * As long as your command line parsing logic is small, it can remain in
   *main.rs*.
 * When the command line parsing logic starts getting complicated, extract it
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ should be limited to the following:
 * Handling the error if `run` returns an error
 
 This pattern is about separating concerns: *main.rs* handles running the
-program, and *lib.rs* handles all the logic of the task at hand. Because you
+program and *lib.rs* handles all the logic of the task at hand. Because you
 can’t test the `main` function directly, this structure lets you test all of
 your program’s logic by moving it into functions in *lib.rs*. The code that
 remains in *main.rs* will be small enough to verify its correctness by reading
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ named for their purpose.
 
 So far, we’ve extracted the logic responsible for parsing the command line
 arguments from `main` and placed it in the `parse_config` function. Doing so
-helped us to see that the `query` and `file_path` values were related and that
+helped us see that the `query` and `file_path` values were related, and that
 relationship should be conveyed in our code. We then added a `Config` struct to
 name the related purpose of `query` and `file_path` and to be able to return the
 values’ names as struct field names from the `parse_config` function.
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@ they should do instead. Let’s fix that now.
 #### Improving the Error Message
 
 In Listing 12-8, we add a check in the `new` function that will verify that the
-slice is long enough before accessing index 1 and 2. If the slice isn’t long
-enough, the program panics and displays a better error message.
+slice is long enough before accessing index 1 and index 2. If the slice isn’t
+long enough, the program panics and displays a better error message.
 
 <Listing number="12-8" file-name="src/main.rs" caption="Adding a check for the number of arguments">
 
@@ -222,10 +222,10 @@ enough, the program panics and displays a better error message.
 This code is similar to [the `Guess::new` function we wrote in Listing
 9-13][ch9-custom-types]<!-- ignore -->, where we called `panic!` when the
 `value` argument was out of the range of valid values. Instead of checking for
-a range of values here, we’re checking that the length of `args` is at least 3
-and the rest of the function can operate under the assumption that this
+a range of values here, we’re checking that the length of `args` is at least
+`3` and the rest of the function can operate under the assumption that this
 condition has been met. If `args` has fewer than three items, this condition
-will be true, and we call the `panic!` macro to end the program immediately.
+will be `true`, and we call the `panic!` macro to end the program immediately.
 
 With these extra few lines of code in `new`, let’s run the program without any
 arguments again to see what the error looks like now:
@@ -235,8 +235,8 @@ arguments again to see what the error looks like now:
 ```
 
 This output is better: we now have a reasonable error message. However, we also
-have extraneous information we don’t want to give to our users. Perhaps using
-the technique we used in Listing 9-13 isn’t the best to use here: a call to
+have extraneous information we don’t want to give to our users. Perhaps the
+technique we used in Listing 9-13 isn’t the best one to use here: a call to
 `panic!` is more appropriate for a programming problem than a usage problem,
 [as discussed in Chapter 9][ch9-error-guidelines]<!-- ignore -->. Instead,
 we’ll use the other technique you learned about in Chapter 9—[returning a
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ well, which we’ll do in the next listing.
 </Listing>
 
 Our `build` function returns a `Result` with a `Config` instance in the success
-case and a `&'static str` in the error case. Our error values will always be
+case and a string literal in the error case. Our error values will always be
 string literals that have the `'static` lifetime.
 
 We’ve made two changes in the body of the function: instead of calling `panic!`
@@ -306,15 +306,15 @@ In this listing, we’ve used a method we haven’t covered in detail yet:
 `unwrap_or_else`, which is defined on `Result<T, E>` by the standard library.
 Using `unwrap_or_else` allows us to define some custom, non-`panic!` error
 handling. If the `Result` is an `Ok` value, this method’s behavior is similar
-to `unwrap`: it returns the inner value `Ok` is wrapping. However, if the value
-is an `Err` value, this method calls the code in the *closure*, which is an
-anonymous function we define and pass as an argument to `unwrap_or_else`. We’ll
-cover closures in more detail in [Chapter 13][ch13]<!-- ignore -->. For now,
-you just need to know that `unwrap_or_else` will pass the inner value of the
-`Err`, which in this case is the static string `"not enough arguments"` that we
-added in Listing 12-9, to our closure in the argument `err` that appears
-between the vertical pipes. The code in the closure can then use the `err`
-value when it runs.
+to `unwrap`: it returns the inner value that `Ok` is wrapping. However, if the
+value is an `Err` value, this method calls the code in the *closure*, which is
+an anonymous function we define and pass as an argument to `unwrap_or_else`.
+We’ll cover closures in more detail in [Chapter 13][ch13]<!-- ignore -->. For
+now, you just need to know that `unwrap_or_else` will pass the inner value of
+the `Err`, which in this case is the static string `"not enough arguments"`
+that we added in Listing 12-9, to our closure in the argument `err` that
+appears between the vertical pipes. The code in the closure can then use the
+`err` value when it runs.
 
 We’ve added a new `use` line to bring `process` from the standard library into
 scope. The code in the closure that will be run in the error case is only two
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ know that `Box<dyn Error>` means the function will return a type that
 implements the `Error` trait, but we don’t have to specify what particular type
 the return value will be. This gives us flexibility to return error values that
 may be of different types in different error cases. The `dyn` keyword is short
-for “dynamic.”
+for *dynamic*.
 
 Second, we’ve removed the call to `expect` in favor of the `?` operator, as we
 talked about in [Chapter 9][ch9-question-mark]<!-- ignore -->. Rather than
@@ -423,22 +423,22 @@ with `Config::build` in Listing 12-10, but with a slight difference:
 ```
 
 We use `if let` rather than `unwrap_or_else` to check whether `run` returns an
-`Err` value and call `process::exit(1)` if it does. The `run` function doesn’t
-return a value that we want to `unwrap` in the same way that `Config::build`
-returns the `Config` instance. Because `run` returns `()` in the success case,
-we only care about detecting an error, so we don’t need `unwrap_or_else` to
-return the unwrapped value, which would only be `()`.
+`Err` value and to call `process::exit(1)` if it does. The `run` function
+doesn’t return a value that we want to `unwrap` in the same way that
+`Config::build` returns the `Config` instance. Because `run` returns `()` in
+the success case, we only care about detecting an error, so we don’t need
+`unwrap_or_else` to return the unwrapped value, which would only be `()`.
 
 The bodies of the `if let` and the `unwrap_or_else` functions are the same in
 both cases: we print the error and exit.
 
 ### Splitting Code into a Library Crate
 
 Our `minigrep` project is looking good so far! Now we’ll split the
-*src/main.rs* file and put some code into the *src/lib.rs* file. That way we
+*src/main.rs* file and put some code into the *src/lib.rs* file. That way, we
 can test the code and have a *src/main.rs* file with fewer responsibilities.
 
-Let’s move all the code that isn’t the `main` function from *src/main.rs* to
+Let’s move all the code that isn’t in the `main` function from *src/main.rs* to
 *src/lib.rs*:
 
 * The `run` function definition
@@ -476,8 +476,7 @@ binary crate in *src/main.rs*, as shown in Listing 12-14.
 We add a `use minigrep::Config` line to bring the `Config` type from the
 library crate into the binary crate’s scope, and we prefix the `run` function
 with our crate name. Now all the functionality should be connected and should
-work. Run the program with `cargo run` and make sure everything works
-correctly.
+work. Run the program with `cargo run` and make sure everything works correctly.
 
 Whew! That was a lot of work, but we’ve set ourselves up for success in the
 future. Now it’s much easier to handle errors, and we’ve made the code more