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Co-authored-by: Michelle Malcher <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Anoosha Pilli <[email protected]>

apex-workflows/design-the-application/2-design-the-application.md

@@ -1,36 +1,33 @@
-# Design the Doctor Appointments Made Easy Application
+# Design the 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' Application
 
 ## Introduction
 
-Hands-on Lab:
-
-In this lab, you will design the Doctor Appointments Made Easy application using Oracle APEX. The application will streamline the doctor appointment process, allowing seamless interactions between doctors, patients, and hospital staff.
+In this lab, you design the 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' application using Oracle APEX. The application will streamline the doctor appointment process, allowing seamless interactions between doctors, patients, and hospital staff.
 
 ### Objectives
 
-In this lab, you :
-- Create the APEX Application.
+In this lab, you:
+- Create the APEX Application
 - Create Application users
-- Install Sample dataset
+- Install the Sample Dataset
 
 Estimated Time: 20 minutes
 
 ### Prerequisites
-1. Access to Oracle APEX.
-2. Ensure that users (doctors, patients, and hospital staff) are created using the Manage Users And Groups menu option under Workspace Administration. To create these users, follow the the instructions specified in Step 1.
+- Access to Oracle APEX.
 
 ## Task 1: Create Application Users
-In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
+In this lab, you create users for 'Doctor Appointments made Easy!' Application.
 
-1. Navigate to **Workspace Administration** by clicking the **Administration icon** on the Application home page and select **Manage Users and Groups** from the dropdown list.
+1. On the Application home page, click the **Administration icon** and select **Manage Users and Groups** from the dropdown list.
 
   ![Manage Users and Groups](./images/manage-users-and-groups.png " ")
 
-2. Click **Create Multiple Users**
+2. Click **Create Multiple Users**.
 
   ![Create Multiple Users](./images/create-users.png " ")
 
-3. Under **Create multiple Users**, create the following users:
+3. You will create the following users for the application:
 
     | Persona        | User Name |
     | -------------- | --------- |
@@ -44,49 +41,55 @@ In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
     |                | DARYL     |
     |                | RAJESH    |
     | Hospital Staff | STEVE     |
+    {: title="List of Users to Create in the Application"}
+
+ In the **Create multiple Users** wizard, specify the following attributes:
+    - For a List of Email Addresses: Enter **Email IDs of the Users** given in the table below.
 
-4. Specify the following attributes:
-    - For a List of Email Addresses: Enter **Email IDs of the Users**
-    | List of Email Addresses |
-    | --------- |
-    | [email protected]    |
-    | [email protected]  |
-    | [email protected]      |
-    | [email protected]        |
-    | [email protected]       |
-    | [email protected]    |
-    | [email protected]     |
-    | [email protected]     |
-    | [email protected]    |
-    | [email protected]     |
-    - For Usernames : Select **Exclude @ domain as part of the username**
-    - For password and Confirm Password: **Enter a password of your wish**
-    - Click **Next**
+    ```
+    <copy>
+      
+      [email protected]    
+      [email protected]   
+      [email protected]       
+      [email protected]         
+      [email protected]       
+      [email protected]     
+      [email protected]     
+      [email protected]     
+      [email protected]    
+      [email protected]   
+      </copy>
+      ```
+
+    - For Usernames: Select **Exclude @ domain as part of the username**
+    - For Password and Confirm Password: **Enter a password**
+    - Click **Next**.
+
     ![Create Multiple Users - details](./images/create-multiple-users.png " ")
 
-5. And then, Click **Create Valid Users**
+5. Click **Create Valid Users**.
   ![Click validate users](./images/create-valid-users.png " ")
-6. Users are now created in your Workspace.
+ Users are now created in your Workspace.
 
-## Task 2: Create the Doctor Appointments Made Easy Application
+## Task 2: Create the 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' Application
 
 1. Navigate to **App Builder**.
   ![Select App Builder](./images/select-app-builder.png " ")
 
 2. Click **Create**.
   ![Click create](./images/click-create.png " ")
 
-3. Under **Create an Application**,
-    - For Name, enter **Doctor Appointments Made Easy!**
+3. In the Create an Application wizard, for Name, enter **Doctor Appointments Made Easy!**.
+
       ![Create an Application](./images/create-an-application.png " ")
 
 4. Click **Create Application**.
 
-## Task 3: Sample Table and Sample Data
-
-1. Install the dataset.
+## Task 3: Install Sample Data
+   In this task, you install a Sample Dataset using a SQL Script.
 
-2. Navigate to **SQL Workshop** and click **SQL Scripts**.
+1. Navigate to **SQL Workshop** and click **SQL Scripts**.
   ![Click SQL Scripts](./images/click-sql-scripts.png " ")
 
 3. Click **Create**.
@@ -195,23 +198,23 @@ In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
     (60, 'MARTIN', 'RENOLOGY','MS','[email protected]');
     </copy>
     ```
-5. For Script Name, enter **Create DB Tables** and Click **Run**.
+5. For Script Name, enter **Create DB Tables** and click **Run**.
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/create-db-tables.png " ")
 
-6. Click **Run Now**.
+6. Click **Run Now**. The statements are processed and the sample tables and data are created.
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/click-run-now.png " ")
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/create-tables-output.png " ")
 
 ## Task 4: Create Package Spec and Package Body
 
-1. Navigate back to **SQL Workshop** and click **SQL Scripts**.
+1. Navigate to **SQL Workshop** and click **SQL Scripts**.
 
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/click-sql-scripts1.png " ")
 
 2. Click **Create**.
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/click-create2.png " ")
 
-3. Copy and paste the provided commands to create a package spec named **eba\_demo\_wf\_doc\_apt.sql**.
+3. Copy and paste the code snippet to create a package spec named **eba\_demo\_wf\_doc\_apt.sql**.
 
     ```
     <copy>
@@ -251,7 +254,7 @@ In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
     </copy>
     ```
 
-4. For Script Name, enter **Create Package Spec** and Click **Run**.
+4. For Script Name, enter **Create Package Spec** and click **Run**.
 
     ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/create-package-spec.png " ")
 
@@ -368,7 +371,7 @@ In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
     </copy>
     ```
 
-7. For Script Name, enter **Create Package Body** and Click **Run**.
+7. For Script Name, enter **Create Package Body** and click **Run**.
 
     ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/create-pckage-body.png " ")
 
@@ -377,7 +380,7 @@ In this lab, you create users for Doctor Appointments made Easy Application.
   ![Click create SQL Scripts](./images/click-run-now2.png " ")
 
 ## Summary
-You have successfully completed the initial steps for designing the Doctor Appointments Made Easy application. You created Doctor Appointments Made Easy Application, and then added Application users, created Sample Datasets, and a Package.
+You have successfully completed the initial steps for designing the 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' application. You first created a 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' Application, and then added Application users, created Sample Datasets, and a Package.
 
 ### What's Next
 In the next lab, you will learn how to create a Workflow using Oracle APEX.

apex-workflows/identify-business-steps/1-identify-business-steps.md

@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
-# Doctor Appointments Made Easy - Identify Business steps
+# Identify Business steps
 
 ## Introduction
 
-In this Lab, you learn how to implement an efficient system to schedule and manage doctor consultations where you design an APEX Application titled **Doctor Appointments Made Easy** that leverages the Workflow component to schedule and manage doctor consultations efficiently. To achieve this, we need to follow a structured approach:
+In this lab, you learn to implement an efficient system to schedule and manage doctor consultations by designing an APEX Application called **Doctor Appointments Made Easy!**, that leverages the Workflow component to schedule and manage doctor consultations efficiently. To achieve this, we need to follow a structured approach:
 
 - Break down the business logic into manageable, executable steps.
 - Identify the sequences and conditions that govern the execution of these steps.
 - Identify the key participants in the organization that are involved in this business process.
 
-> **Note:** _In APEX Workflow terminology - we refer to an executable step as an Activity and a sequence/condition as a Connection._
+> **Note:** _In APEX Workflow terminology, we refer to an executable step as an **Activity** and a sequence/condition as a **Connection**._
 
 
 ### Objectives
 
-In this Lab, you will:
-- Identify Business steps required to create Doctor Appointments Made Easy Application.
+In this lab, you will:
+- Identify Business steps required to create 'Doctor Appointments Made Easy!' Application.
 
 Estimated Time: 10 minutes
 
@@ -23,38 +23,36 @@ Estimated Time: 10 minutes
 1. Access to Oracle APEX.
 
 
-Welcome to our hands-on Lab, where we will create an APEX Application called "Doctor Appointments Made Easy."
-
 ## Breaking down the Business Logic
 
-We will begin by dissecting the medical appointment business process into distinct steps and identifying the actors or participants associated with each step. Here's an overview:
+We begin by dissecting the medical appointment business process into distinct steps and identifying the actors or participants associated with each step. Here's an overview:
 
 ### Steps in the Medical Appointment Business Process
 
 | Step No. | Step Description                                             | Step Type | Actor                  |
 |---------|-------------------------------------------------------------|-----------|------------------------|
-| 1       | Schedule a doctor appointment                               | Manual    | Patient                |
-| 2       | Login to the application, fill in patient details, and submit an appointment request on behalf of the patient | Manual    | Hospital Management Representative/Staff |
-| 3       | Check doctor's availability for the requested appointment date/time | Automatic | Workflow              |
-| 4       | If the doctor is busy, send a "No-Appointment" email to the patient and close the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow              |
-| 5       | If the doctor is available, raise an "Approval Task" for the doctor to confirm the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow              |
-| 6       | Log in to the application to access the appointment request | Manual    | Doctor                 |
-| 7       | Approve the appointment request | Manual    | Doctor                 |
-| 8       | Reject the appointment request | Manual    | Doctor                 |
-| 9       | If the doctor rejects, send a "No-Appointment" email to the patient and close the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow              |
-| 10      | If the doctor approves, enter appointment details in the system with the status 'Confirmed' | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 11      | Check if the patient had a previous appointment with the same doctor in the last seven days | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 12      | If the patient had a previous appointment, mark this as a follow-up visit, don't charge fees, and raise an invoice with zero payment request for the patient to confirm | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 13      | If it's a new visit, raise an invoice with fees and payment request for the patient to confirm | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 14      | In both cases, send an email notifying the patient of the appointment confirmation and the invoice request | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 15      | Log in to the application to confirm the invoice | Manual    | Patient                |
-| 16      | If the patient doesn't confirm the invoice within a specific period, send a "No-Appointment" email and close the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 17      | If the patient confirms the invoice, update the appointment status to "PAID" in the system of records | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 18      | Wait until the appointment is completed | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 19      | Raise a feedback request to the patient | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 20      | Log in to the application and provide feedback | Manual    | Patient                |
-| 21      | If the patient doesn't complete the feedback request within a specified period, close the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow |
-| 22      | If the patient provides feedback, send a "Thank You" email to the patient and then close the appointment request | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 1       | Schedule a doctor's appointment.                               | Manual    | Patient                |
+| 2       | Login to the application, fill in patient details, and submit an appointment request on behalf of the patient. | Manual    | Hospital Management Representative/Staff |
+| 3       | Check doctor's availability for the requested appointment date/time. | Automatic | Workflow              |
+| 4       | If the doctor is busy, send a 'No-Appointment' email to the patient and close the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow              |
+| 5       | If the doctor is available, raise an 'Approval Task' for the doctor to confirm the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow              |
+| 6       | Log in to the application to access the appointment request. | Manual    | Doctor                 |
+| 7       | Approve the appointment request. | Manual    | Doctor                 |
+| 8       | Reject the appointment request. | Manual    | Doctor                 |
+| 9       | If the doctor rejects, send a 'No-Appointment' email to the patient and close the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow              |
+| 10      | If the doctor approves, enter appointment details in the system with the status 'Confirmed'. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 11      | Check if the patient had a previous appointment with the same doctor in the last seven days. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 12      | If the patient had a previous appointment, mark this as a follow-up visit, don't charge fees, and raise an invoice with zero payment request for the patient to confirm. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 13      | If it's a new visit, raise an invoice with fees and payment request for the patient to confirm. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 14      | In both cases, send an email notifying the patient of the appointment confirmation and the invoice request. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 15      | Log in to the application to confirm the invoice. | Manual    | Patient                |
+| 16      | If the patient doesn't confirm the invoice within a specific period, send a 'No-Appointment' email and close the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 17      | If the patient confirms the invoice, update the appointment status to 'PAID' in the system of records | Automatic. | Workflow |
+| 18      | Wait until the appointment is completed. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 19      | Raise a feedback request to the patient. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 20      | Log in to the application and provide feedback. | Manual    | Patient                |
+| 21      | If the patient doesn't complete the feedback request within a specified period, close the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow |
+| 22      | If the patient provides feedback, send a 'Thank You' email to the patient and then close the appointment request. | Automatic | Workflow |
 
 This comprehensive breakdown illustrates the significance of workflow in managing complex business processes, making the system efficient and responsive.
 
@@ -66,7 +64,7 @@ You now understand the significance of workflow in managing complex business pro
 
 ### What's Next
 
-In our next labs, you will create a flowchart based on the automated steps, helping us visualize the flow of the business logic and its seamless execution. Stay tuned as we dive into the practical implementation of this intuitive doctor appointment management system!
+In the next lab, you will create a flowchart based on the automated steps, helping us visualize the flow of the business logic and its seamless execution. Stay tuned as we dive into the practical implementation of this intuitive doctor appointment management system!
 
 You may now **proceed to the next Lab**.