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Your implementation of the getSalaryInfo method is on the right track, but there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed to fully meet the task requirements:

  1. Use of Date Instead of LocalDate: The task checklist specifies using LocalDate for date handling instead of Date. This change is crucial for ensuring your code aligns with modern Java practices and improves date manipulation capabilities.

  2. Formatter as a Constant: The SimpleDateFormat instance should be declared as a constant field. This change will enhance code readability and maintainability.

These issues are important to resolve to ensure your code meets the core requirements of the task. Once these are addressed, your solution will be much stronger! 😊 Keep up the good work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you need further guidance.

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🔄 Fix the issues, commit the changes, and then re-request my review using the Re-request review button in the Reviewers tab.

public String getSalaryInfo(String[] names, String[] data, String dateFrom, String dateTo) {
return null;
SimpleDateFormat dateFormat = new SimpleDateFormat("dd.MM.yyyy");

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Consider making dateFormat a constant field as per the checklist: 'If you create a formatter, make it a constant field.' This will make your code easier to maintain and understand.

Comment on lines 15 to 16
Date startDate;
Date endDate;

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It's recommended to use LocalDate instead of Date for better date handling. This is mentioned in the checklist: 'Use LocalDate instead of Date.'

} catch (ParseException e) {
throw new IllegalArgumentException("Invalid date format");
}

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Remove redundant empty lines to improve code readability. The checklist advises against starting class or method implementations with empty lines.

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Your implementation of the getSalaryInfo method in SalaryInfo.java has been reviewed and it meets the task requirements and constraints. 🎉

Review Summary:

  • Correct Use of LocalDate: You've successfully used LocalDate for date handling, which is a key requirement.
  • Constant Formatter: Declaring DateTimeFormatter as a constant is a great practice and aligns with the task requirements.
  • Efficient String Handling: Utilizing StringBuilder for string concatenation within loops is a smart choice for performance.
  • Cross-Platform Compatibility: Using System.lineSeparator() ensures your code runs smoothly across different operating systems.
  • Readable Code: Your use of informative and descriptive variable names greatly enhances the readability of your code.

Your code is well-structured and adheres to the task requirements. There are no critical issues that would prevent the functionality of your code. However, always strive to review and refine your code based on feedback to continue improving your skills. Keep up the great work and continue learning from each task! 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

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