salary #1376
salary #1376
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Thank you for your hard work on this project! 😊 While your code is well-structured and meets most of the task requirements, there are a couple of critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the pull request.
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Boundary Date Logic: The current logic for checking the date range excludes the boundary dates. This could lead to incorrect salary calculations for employees working on the start or end dates. Please adjust the logic to include these dates.
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Variable Name Typo: There's a typo in the variable name
hoursLyRate. It should be corrected tohourlyRateto ensure clarity and accuracy in your code.
Once these issues are resolved, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions. 🚀
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| LocalDate workDate = LocalDate.parse(parts[0], formatter); | ||
| String employeeName = parts[1]; | ||
| int hoursWorked = Integer.parseInt(parts[2]); | ||
| int hoursLyRate = Integer.parseInt(parts[3]); |
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There is a typo in the variable name hoursLyRate. It should be hourlyRate to accurately reflect the meaning of the variable.
| String employeeName = parts[1]; | ||
| int hoursWorked = Integer.parseInt(parts[2]); | ||
| int hoursLyRate = Integer.parseInt(parts[3]); | ||
| if (workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to)) { |
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The condition workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to) excludes the boundary dates. If the intention is to include the start and end dates in the range, consider using workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to).
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Review Summary
Great job on addressing the issues from the previous review! 🎉 Your code is mostly well-structured and effectively implements the salary calculation logic. Here are some key points and suggestions for further improvement:
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Boundary Date Logic: You've successfully corrected the logic to include the boundary dates in the salary calculation. This ensures that employees working on the start or end dates are accounted for, which is crucial for accurate calculations.
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Variable Name Typo: The variable name
hourlyRateis now consistently used throughout your code, replacing the previous typohoursLyRate. This change enhances the clarity and readability of your code.
Your code now meets the task requirements and constraints. While the decision is to APPROVE your Pull Request to help you move forward with your learning, it's important to continuously review and refine your code. Addressing critical issues promptly will help you avoid similar problems in the future.
Keep up the great work, and continue to learn from each iteration! 🚀
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| String employeeName = parts[1]; | ||
| int hoursWorked = Integer.parseInt(parts[2]); | ||
| int hourlyRate = Integer.parseInt(parts[3]); | ||
| if (workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to)) { |
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The current condition if (workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to)) excludes the boundary dates. To include the start and end dates, you should adjust the condition to if (workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to)) to if (workDate.isBefore(from) || workDate.isAfter(to)).
| StringBuilder report = new StringBuilder(); | ||
| report.append("Report for period ") |
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| StringBuilder report = new StringBuilder(); | |
| report.append("Report for period ") | |
| StringBuilder report = new StringBuilder() | |
| .append("Report for period ") |
you can use object right after it's creation too
| for (int i = 0; i < names.length; i++) { | ||
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| for (int i = 0; i < names.length; i++) { | |
| for (int i = 0; i < names.length; i++) { |
better leave empty space before loop
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