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             <h4>Personal Project - 2020-2023</h4>
-            <p>To recovery model rockets, a parachute needs to be
-              ejected at the correct time. For this to happen a flight
-              computer is needed to continuously read out altitude
-              data and calculate the deployment point.
-              Since no good recovery hardware is available on the
-              market a new, redundant, and reliable computer needs
-              to be developed.</p>
+            <p>
+              In order to successfully recover model rockets, precise timing 
+              is essential for the ejection of a parachute. Achieving this 
+              requires the utilization of a flight computer, which continually 
+              monitors altitude data and computes the optimal deployment moment. 
+              Given the absence of suitable recovery hardware in the current 
+              market, there is a pressing need to innovate and create a new, 
+              redundant, and dependable computer system for this purpose.</p>
             <img class="image" src="images/vega.webp" alt="CATS Vega Flight Computer">
             <p class="image-desc">Rendering of the CATS Vega flight computer</p>
             <h4>Technology</h4>
-            <p>Based around a STM32 microcontroller the software
-              utilizes a Kalman Filter to fuse together sensor data to
-              get accurate velocity and altitude information. Over a
-              self-developed telemetry protocol, using FHSS and LoRa,
-              data can be sent to the ground.
-              High power output channels can switch valves or
-              pyrotechnics. Additionally, servo motor channels were
-              added to allow the user to set the device up as he likes.
-              Over USB and with a Electron desktop application the
-              user can easily change the device settings.</p>
+            <p>Built around an STM32 microcontroller, the software leverages 
+              a sophisticated Kalman Filter to integrate sensor data, ensuring 
+              precise and reliable velocity and altitude measurements. Employing 
+              a self-developed telemetry protocol that combines Frequency-Hopping 
+              Spread Spectrum (FHSS) and LoRa technology, telemetry data can 
+              efficiently be transmitted to a ground station. Moreover, the system 
+              boasts high-power output channels capable of controlling valves or 
+              pyrotechnic devices. To further enhance user customization, it
+              incorporated servo motor channels, allowing users to configure 
+              the device to their preferences. Streamlining the user experience, 
+              adjustments to device settings can be effortlessly made via USB 
+              connection in a user-friendly Electron desktop application.</p>
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               <p class="image-desc">Interactive Board Viewer</p>
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