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 <h2>Our Software</h2>
 
-<p>This is our software to support you with nanopublication technology.</p>
+<p>This is our software that supports you with nanopublication technology.</p>
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 <h3>Nanodash</h3>
 <p>
 Nanodash is our user interface and API provider for dealing with nanopublications.
-It provides user-friendly templates for nanopublication creation, user-specific feeds, search, and journal connection to formally publish nanopublications with academic articles.
+It provides user-friendly templates for nanopublication creation, user-specific feeds, search, and connects to journals for formal publication with academic articles.
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 <a href="https://github.com/knowledgepixels/nanodash/" class="button" target="_blank">GitHub</a>
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ <h3>nanopub-java</h3>
 <h3>Nanopub Query</h3>
 <p>
 Nanopub Query is our second-generation service for querying the published nanopublications with SPARQL.
-It divides the nanopublications per user profile and per nanopublication type into different triple stores, so queries to these triple stores are not slowed down by unrelated nanopublications.
+To make querying fast and scalable, it provides many separate triple stores, each covering a specific subset of all nanopublications.
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