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Improve Rain Bird documentation style #35963

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Improve Rain Bird documentation style with quality scale suggested improvements from the silver and gold quality scale:

  • installation parameters
  • configuration parameters
  • improved style for available entities
  • how data is updated

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  • Documentation
    • Updated the Rain Bird integration documentation for improved clarity and detail.
    • Expanded the list of supported device types to include "Number" and "Switch."
    • Introduced new configuration options for "Host" and "Password" fields.
    • Added a new section on "Data updates" explaining the polling mechanism.
    • Reformatted entity descriptions for better understanding and usability.
    • Clarified the default irrigation time configuration and provided an example for starting irrigation.
    • Preserved the known limitations section regarding the Rain Bird LNK WiFi module.

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The documentation for the Rain Bird integration in Home Assistant has been revised for improved clarity and detail. Key modifications include a title change, an expanded list of supported device types, the introduction of new configuration options, and a restructured configuration section. A new "Data updates" section has been added, and descriptions for various entity types have been enhanced. The actions and known limitations of the integration remain unchanged, with a focus on providing comprehensive and clear information.

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source/_integrations/rainbird.markdown Updated title, expanded supported device types, added new configuration options, restructured configuration section, added "Data updates" section, enhanced entity descriptions, retained actions and limitations.

Sequence Diagram(s)

sequenceDiagram
    participant User
    participant HomeAssistant
    participant RainBird

    User->>HomeAssistant: Configure Rain Bird integration
    HomeAssistant->>RainBird: Send Host and Password
    RainBird-->>HomeAssistant: Acknowledge configuration
    HomeAssistant->>RainBird: Poll irrigation zones
    RainBird-->>HomeAssistant: Provide zone data
    HomeAssistant->>User: Display irrigation status
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🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (3)
source/_integrations/rainbird.markdown (3)

67-67: Fix typo in configuration description

There's a typographical error in the default irrigation time description.

-  description: Te number of minutes that the irrigation will run when turning on a zone switch. The default is 6 minutes. This can be overridden with an action (see below).
+  description: The number of minutes that the irrigation will run when turning on a zone switch. The default is 6 minutes. This can be overridden with an action (see below).

100-101: Improve grammar in Rain Delay description

The phrase "number of days delay" should be revised for better clarity.

-    of days delay when combined with another weather forecast integration in Home Assistant.
+    of days to delay irrigation when combined with another weather forecast integration in Home Assistant.
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[grammar] ~101-~101: Make sure the noun ‘number’ is in agreement with the verb ‘delay’. Beware that some collective nouns (like ‘police’ or ‘team’) can be treated as both singular and plural.
Context: ...ch as increasing the number of days delay when combined with another weather fore...

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85-85: Remove trailing spaces

There are trailing spaces at the end of these lines that should be removed for consistency.

Also applies to: 91-91, 99-99

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[grammar] ~101-~101: Make sure the noun ‘number’ is in agreement with the verb ‘delay’. Beware that some collective nouns (like ‘police’ or ‘team’) can be treated as both singular and plural.
Context: ...ch as increasing the number of days delay when combined with another weather fore...

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source/_integrations/rainbird.markdown (3)

Line range hint 26-59: LGTM! Clear and well-structured prerequisites section.

The prerequisites and configuration sections follow Home Assistant documentation standards and provide clear setup instructions.

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[grammar] ~101-~101: Make sure the noun ‘number’ is in agreement with the verb ‘delay’. Beware that some collective nouns (like ‘police’ or ‘team’) can be treated as both singular and plural.
Context: ...ch as increasing the number of days delay when combined with another weather fore...

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70-75: LGTM! Clear explanation of update behavior.

The data updates section provides valuable information about polling frequencies and update behavior.


Line range hint 26-109: Overall documentation improvements are excellent!

The changes successfully enhance the Rain Bird documentation by:

  • Providing clear setup instructions and configuration options
  • Adding valuable information about data update behavior
  • Structuring entity information in a clear, consistent format
  • Including detailed descriptions for each entity type

The documentation now provides a more comprehensive and user-friendly guide for the integration.

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[grammar] ~101-~101: Make sure the noun ‘number’ is in agreement with the verb ‘delay’. Beware that some collective nouns (like ‘police’ or ‘team’) can be treated as both singular and plural.
Context: ...ch as increasing the number of days delay when combined with another weather fore...

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🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (3)
source/_integrations/rainbird.markdown (3)

48-48: Remove extra blank line

There are multiple consecutive blank lines here. According to markdown best practices, only single blank lines should be used for spacing.

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{% configuration_basic %}
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{% configuration_basic %}
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85-85: Remove trailing spaces

There are trailing spaces at the end of these lines. While they don't affect the rendered output, they should be removed for consistency.

-  - **Description**: The rain sensor will tell if you if the device has detected rain. 
+  - **Description**: The rain sensor will tell if you if the device has detected rain.
-  - **Description**: The irrigation schedule [Calendar](https://www.home-assistant.io/integrations/calendar/) 
+  - **Description**: The irrigation schedule [Calendar](https://www.home-assistant.io/integrations/calendar/)
-  - **Description**: Lets you set and view the number of days, if any, the automatic irrigation schedule has 
+  - **Description**: Lets you set and view the number of days, if any, the automatic irrigation schedule has

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85-85: Fix grammatical error in rain sensor description

There's a duplicate "if you" in the rain sensor description.

-  - **Description**: The rain sensor will tell if you if the device has detected rain.
+  - **Description**: The rain sensor will tell you if the device has detected rain.
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Line range hint 111-150: Well-structured actions and limitations documentation

The actions and limitations sections are well-documented with clear examples and important operational constraints. The remove integration section follows the standard template.

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Line range hint 1-150: Excellent documentation improvements

The changes significantly improve the Rain Bird integration documentation by:

  • Providing clear setup instructions and prerequisites
  • Explaining configuration options comprehensively
  • Adding detailed entity descriptions
  • Including important operational details about data updates
  • Following Home Assistant's documentation standards consistently

The documentation now provides a much better user experience for setting up and using the Rain Bird integration.

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48-48: Expected: 1; Actual: 2
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