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Co-authored-by: Malcolm Smith <[email protected]>

Doc/library/os.rst

@@ -785,9 +785,9 @@ process and user.
    ``socket.gethostbyaddr(socket.gethostname())``.
 
    On macOS, iOS and Android, this returns the *kernel* name and version (i.e.,
-   ``'Darwin'`` on macOS and iOS; ``'Linux'`` on Android), not the user-facing
-   operating system name. :func:`platform.uname()` can be used to get the
-   user-facing operating system name on iOS and Android.
+   ``'Darwin'`` on macOS and iOS; ``'Linux'`` on Android). :func:`platform.uname()` 
+   can be used to get the user-facing operating system name and version on iOS and 
+   Android.
 
    .. availability:: Unix.
 

Doc/library/platform.rst

@@ -148,8 +148,9 @@ Cross Platform
    Returns the system/OS name, such as ``'Linux'``, ``'Darwin'``, ``'Java'``,
    ``'Windows'``. An empty string is returned if the value cannot be determined.
 
-   On iOS, this returns the OS name (i.e, ``'iOS``` or ``'iPadOS'``), rather than
-   the kernel name (``'Darwin'``).
+   On iOS and Android, this returns the user-facing OS name (i.e, ``'iOS``, 
+   ``'iPadOS'`` or ``'Android'``). To obtain the kernel name (``'Darwin'`` or 
+   ``'Linux'``), use :func:`os.uname()`.
 
 .. function:: system_alias(system, release, version)
 
@@ -163,8 +164,8 @@ Cross Platform
    Returns the system's release version, e.g. ``'#3 on degas'``. An empty string is
    returned if the value cannot be determined.
 
-   On iOS, this is the iOS version, not the Darwin kernel version. To obtain
-   the Darwin kernel version, use :func:`os.uname()`.
+   On iOS and Android, this is the user-facing OS version. To obtain the 
+   Darwin or Linux kernel version, use :func:`os.uname()`.
 
 .. function:: uname()
 

Lib/test/test_platform.py

@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ def test_uname(self):
 
         if sys.platform == "ios":
             self.assertIn(res.system, {"iOS", "iPadOS"})
-            self.assertIn(res.release, platform.ios_ver().release)
+            self.assertEqual(res.release, platform.ios_ver().release)
 
     @unittest.skipUnless(sys.platform.startswith('win'), "windows only test")
     def test_uname_win32_without_wmi(self):

Lib/test/test_sysconfig.py

@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ def test_platform_in_subprocess(self):
 
     @unittest.skipIf(is_wasi, "Incompatible with WASI mapdir and OOT builds")
     @unittest.skipIf(is_apple_mobile,
-                     f"{sys.platform} doesn't distribute config.h in the runtime environment")
+                     f"{sys.platform} doesn't include config folder at runtime")
     def test_srcdir(self):
         # See Issues #15322, #15364.
         srcdir = sysconfig.get_config_var('srcdir')
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ class MakefileTests(unittest.TestCase):
                      'Test is not Windows compatible')
     @unittest.skipIf(is_wasi, "Incompatible with WASI mapdir and OOT builds")
     @unittest.skipIf(is_apple_mobile,
-                     f"{sys.platform} doesn't distribute config.h in the runtime environment")
+                     f"{sys.platform} doesn't include config folder at runtime")
     def test_get_makefile_filename(self):
         makefile = sysconfig.get_makefile_filename()
         self.assertTrue(os.path.isfile(makefile), makefile)