fix: improve copy

src/pages/_CV/Page1/sections/SectionWorkExperience.astro

@@ -36,28 +36,36 @@ const { class: className } = Astro.props;
         in sales inside a week.
       </Li>
       <Li>
-        Optimized the client-side JS bundle size in our Next.js web site,
-        achieving a 70% reduction, which substantially improved loading times
-        and Web Core Vitals for all users as measured by Lighthouse.
+        Optimized the client-side JS bundle size of the company's Next.js
+        website, achieving a 70% reduction, which substantially improved loading
+        times and Web Core Vitals for all users as measured by Lighthouse.
       </Li>
       <Li>
-        Introduced Zod, a library for stringent schema validation and refactored
-        CMS integration to use strongly-typed GraphQL queries. Resulted in fewer
-        bugs and elevated developer confidence and pace across the team.
+        Improved data integrity and developer confidence by introducing schema
+        validation and GraphQL introspection to the company's application.
       </Li>
       <Li>
         Overhauled DevOps procedures, adding support for multiple environments
-        and initiating a comprehensive CI pipeline for pull requests. This led
-        to more reliable code deployments and increased developer confidence.
+        in a declarative manner, and enabling the team to deploy to production
+        with confidence.
       </Li>
     </Ul>
-    <ChipList items={["TypeScript", "React", "Next.js", "Rust", "SQL"]} />
+    <ChipList
+      items={[
+        "TypeScript",
+        "React",
+        "Next.js",
+        "GitHub Actions",
+        "Rust",
+        "SQL",
+      ]}
+    />
   </Article>
 
   <Article class={className}>
     <HeadlineArticle
       title="Software Developer"
-      place="IT Minds"
+      place="twoday IT Minds"
       placeLink="https://it-minds.dk"
       location="Copenhagen"
       start="2020"

src/pages/_CV/Page2/sections/SectionPersonalProjects.astro

@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ const { class: className } = Astro.props;
 
     <Ul bulleted>
       <Li>
-        Designed and implemented a Shopify-based webshop, integrated with
-        transport management and bookkeeping systems.
+        Designed and implemented a Shopify webshop, integrated with transport
+        management and bookkeeping systems.
       </Li>
       <Li>
         Developed custom applications and scripts to automate tasks related to

src/pages/_CV/Page2/sections/SectionVolunteerWork.astro

@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@ import P from "../../../../components/ui/elements/P.astro";
 import Ul from "../../../../components/ui/elements/Ul.astro";
 import Li from "../../../../components/ui/elements/Li.astro";
 import ChipList from "../../ChipList.astro";
+import H3 from "../../../../components/ui/elements/H3.astro";
 interface Props {
   class?: string;
 }
@@ -17,57 +18,62 @@ const { class: className } = Astro.props;
   <HeadlineSection headline="Volunteer Work" iconName="volunteer" />
 
   <Article class={className}>
-    <HeadlineArticle
-      title="Maintainer"
-      place="@nanostores/lit"
-      placeLink="https://github.com/nanostores/lit"
-      start="2022"
-      end="current"
-    />
-    <P>
-      Architected and developed the official Nanostores integration for Lit,
-      simplifying state management in Lit components. Gained recognition through
-      a recommendation in the Astro framework's documentation.
-    </P>
-    <Ul bulleted>
-      <Li>
-        Developed and maintain a state management integration between Nanostores
-        and Lit, easing the development process for a broad range of projects.
-      </Li>
-      <Li>
-        Earned inclusion in Astro framework's official docs, testifying to the
-        integration's value and utility within the JavaScript community.
-      </Li>
-    </Ul>
-    <ChipList items={["TypeScript", "Lit"]} />
-  </Article>
+    <H3>Open Source</H3>
 
-  <Article class={className}>
-    <HeadlineArticle
-      title="Webmaster"
-      place="Danish Frisbee Sport Union"
-      placeLink="https://dfsu.dk"
-      start="2020"
-      end="2022"
-    />
-    <P>
-      Oversaw and optimized the organization's website, including migration to a
-      cost-effective hosting solution. Implemented a webshop for merchandise and
-      built a dedicated site for a high school PE program.
-    </P>
     <Ul bulleted>
       <Li>
-        Orchestrated the migration of the website to a more cost-efficient
-        hosting provider, achieving significant cost savings for the
-        organization.
+        Developed and maintains the <a
+          href="https://github.com/nanostores/lit"
+          class="underline">official Nanostores integration for Lit</a
+        >. Simplifying state management in Lit components, and helps interop Lit
+        with other frameworks. Gained recognition through a recommendation in
+        the Astro framework's documentation.
       </Li>
       <Li>
-        Launched a webshop to diversify revenue streams through frisbee sales.
+        Contributed pull requests with bug fixes and improvements to various
+        Open Source libraries, with the most impactful being
+        <a href="https://github.com/Stuk/jszip" class="underline">JSZip</a> and
+        <a href="https://github.com/serde-rs/serde" class="underline">Serde</a>.
       </Li>
       <Li>
-        Developed a specialized website to support a high school PE program,
-        extending the organization's reach into educational settings.
+        Contributed bug reports and feedback to various Open Source libraries,
+        including <a
+          href="https://github.com/fabian-hiller/valibot"
+          class="underline">Valibot</a
+        > where I was credited as a contributor early on for helping to improve the
+        API.
       </Li>
+      <ChipList items={["TypeScript", "Lit", "Rust"]} />
     </Ul>
+
+    <Article class={className}>
+      <HeadlineArticle
+        title="Webmaster"
+        place="Danish Frisbee Sport Union"
+        placeLink="https://dfsu.dk"
+        start="2020"
+        end="2022"
+      />
+      <P>
+        Oversaw and optimized the organization's website, including migration to
+        a cost-effective hosting solution. Set up a small webshop for selling
+        merchandise and built a dedicated site for a high school PE program.
+      </P>
+      <Ul bulleted>
+        <Li>
+          Orchestrated the migration of the website to a more cost-efficient
+          hosting provider, achieving significant cost savings for the
+          organization.
+        </Li>
+        <Li>
+          Launched a webshop to diversify revenue streams through merchandise
+          sales.
+        </Li>
+        <Li>
+          Developed a specialized website to support a high school PE program,
+          extending the organization's reach into educational settings.
+        </Li>
+      </Ul>
+    </Article>
   </Article>
 </Section>