I missed this comma change, too.

config/sync/message.template.vba_facility_draft_content.yml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ text:
     value: '<p>Drupal content changes</p>'
     format: rich_text
   -
-    value: '<p>Changes were made to <a href="https://prod.cms.va.gov[message:field_target_node_path]">[message:field_target_node_title]</a> on [message:field_last_updated_by_editor] and saved as draft.<br>Please review the changes at your earliest convenience.</p><p>To approve and publish the draft content,</p><ol><li>Scroll down to the Editorial workflow and click to select <strong>Save as Published</strong>.</li><li>Enter "Approved" as a <strong>Revision log message</strong>.</li><li>Click <strong>Save</strong>.</li></ol><p>The content will be queued for release and available on the page following the next successful content deployment.</p>'
+    value: '<p>Changes were made to <a href="https://prod.cms.va.gov[message:field_target_node_path]">[message:field_target_node_title]</a> on [message:field_last_updated_by_editor], and saved as draft.<br>Please review the changes at your earliest convenience.</p><p>To approve and publish the draft content,</p><ol><li>Scroll down to the Editorial workflow and click to select <strong>Save as Published</strong>.</li><li>Enter "Approved" as a <strong>Revision log message</strong>.</li><li>Click <strong>Save</strong>.</li></ol><p>The content will be queued for release and available on the page following the next successful content deployment.</p>'
     format: rich_text
 settings:
   'token options':