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@@ -8,29 +8,30 @@ Set up notifications in dbt Cloud to receive email or Slack alerts when a job ru
 
 ## Email notifications
 
-You can receive email alerts by configuring the dbt Cloud notification settings. As a **user**, you can set up email notifications for yourself. As an **admin**, you can set up notifications for yourself and other team members. Refer to [Users and licenses](/docs/cloud/manage-access/seats-and-users) for details on license types that are eligible for email notifications.
+You can receive email alerts about jobs by configuring the dbt Cloud email notification settings. Refer to [Users and licenses](/docs/cloud/manage-access/seats-and-users) for details on license types that are eligible for email notifications.
+
+### Prerequisites 
+- You must be either a _developer user_ or an _account admin_ to configure email notifications in dbt Cloud. 
+    - As a developer user, you can set up email notifications for yourself. 
+    - As an account admin, you can set up notifications for yourself and other team members. 
 
 ### Configure email notifications
 
 1. From the gear menu in the upper right corner, choose **Notification settings**.
-1. By default, the **Notification email** option is set to the email address that's in [your dbt Cloud personal profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile). 
+1. By default, dbt Cloud sends notifications to the email address that's in your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page.
 
-    If you're an **admin**, you can choose a different email address. Select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose another address from the list. The list includes internal users with access to the account and also external emails that have been added. 
-    - To add an external email address, select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose **Add external email**. After you add the external email, it becomes available for selection in the **Notification email** dropdown list.
+    If you're an account admin, you can choose a different email address to send notifications to. Select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose another address from the list. The list includes **Internal Users** with access to the account and also **External Emails** that have been added. 
+    - To add an external email address, select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose **Add external email**. After you add the external email, it becomes available for selection in the **Notification email** dropdown list. External emails can be addresses that are outside of your dbt Cloud account and also for third-party integrations like [channels in Microsoft Teams](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/office/tip-send-email-to-a-channel-2c17dbae-acdf-4209-a761-b463bdaaa4ca) and [PagerDuty email integration](https://support.pagerduty.com/docs/email-integration-guide).
 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-notification-external-email.png" width="50%" title="Example of the Notification email dropdown"/>
 
 1. Select the **Environment** (in the dropdown) for the jobs you want to receive notifications about. 
 
-1. Click **Edit** to configure the email notification settings.
-
-    - If you're a **user**, choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications for.
-
-    - If you're an **admin**, use the **Configure notifications for** dropdown to select all the users you want to sent notifications to. Then, choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want them to receive notifications for.
+1. Click **Edit** to configure the email notification settings. Choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications about.
 
 1. When you're done with the settings, click **Save**.
 
-    To set up alerts on jobs from a different environment, select another **Environment** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and click **Save**.
+    To set up alerts on jobs from a different environment, select another **Environment** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and **Save** the changes.
 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-email-notification-settings-page.png" width="100%" title="Example of the Email notifications page"/>
 
@@ -40,18 +41,19 @@ You can receive email alerts by configuring the dbt Cloud notification settings.
 
 ## Slack notifications
 
-You can receive Slack alerts by setting up the Slack integration first, then configuring the dbt Cloud notification settings.
+You can receive Slack alerts about jobs by setting up the Slack integration, then configuring the dbt Cloud Slack notification settings.
 
 :::note 
-If there have been changes to the user roles and you need to move ownership, please [contact support](mailto:[email protected]) and provide the necessary information for them to make this change for you.
+Any account admin can edit the Slack notifications but they'll be limited to configuring the channels that the Slack user has access to. If there has been a change in user roles or Slack permissions where you no longer have access to edit a configured Slack channel, please [contact support](mailto:[email protected]) for assistance. 
 :::
 
 ### Prerequisites 
-- You must be an administrator of the Slack workspace to configure Slack notifications in dbt Cloud. 
+- You must be an administrator of the Slack workspace. 
+- You must be an account admin to configure Slack notifications in dbt Cloud.
 
 ### Set up the Slack integration
 
-1. Go to your [Personal profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
+1. Go to your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
 1. In the **Linked accounts** section, find the Slack application and click **Link**.
    <Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/Link-your-Slack-Profile.png" width="75%" title="Link for the Slack app"/>
 1. Allow dbt Labs to access the Slack workspace. If you are a member of multiple workspaces, you can select the appropriate workspace from the dropdown menu in the upper right corner.
@@ -64,14 +66,16 @@ If there have been changes to the user roles and you need to move ownership, ple
 1. Select the **Notification channel** (in the dropdown) you want to send the job run notifications to. 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-notification-slack-channels.png" width="75%" title="Example of the Notification channel dropdown"/>
 1. Select the **Environment** (in the dropdown) for the jobs you want to receive notifications about. 
-1. Click **Edit** to configure the Slack notification settings. Choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications for.
+1. Click **Edit** to configure the Slack notification settings. Choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications about.
 1. When you're done with the settings, click **Save**.
 
-    To send alerts to another Slack channel, select another **Notification channel** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and click **Save**.
+    To send alerts to another Slack channel, select another **Notification channel** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and **Save** the changes.
+
+    To set up alerts on jobs from a different environment, select another **Environment** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and **Save** the changes.
 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-slack-notification-settings-page.png" width="100%" title="Example of the Slack notifications page"/>
 
 ### Disable the Slack integration
 
-1. Go to your [Personal profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
-1. Find the Slack application in the **Linked accounts** section, click the trash can icon, and click **Unlink**. The Slack notification settings are no longer active.
+1. Go to your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
+1. Find the Slack application in the **Linked accounts** section, click the trash can icon, and click **Unlink**. You will no longer receive Slack notifications. However, other account admins might still receive the notifications. If they want to stop receiving the notifications, they can update their [Slack notification configuration](#configure-slack-notifications) or disable the Slack integration on their dbt Cloud account.