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 dbt Labs has deprecated dbt Metrics and the legacy dbt Semantic Layer, both supported on dbt version 1.5 or lower. These changes will be in effect on _December 15th, 2023_.
 
-This deprecation means dbt Metrics and the legacy Semantic Layer will no longer be supported. We will also remove the product from the dbt Cloud user interface and documentation site.
+This deprecation means dbt Metrics and the legacy Semantic Layer will no longer be supported. We will also remove the feature from the dbt Cloud user interface and documentation site.
 
 ### Why this change?
 
-We understand that changes of this nature can be disruptive and we believe in the potential of the new direction. The [re-released dbt Semantic Layer](/docs/use-dbt-semantic-layer/dbt-sl), powered by MetricFlow, is a significantly improved foundation that enables more flexible query generation, faster performance, and a more dynamic consumption experience. It’s a step towards a brighter future for dbt and its community.
+The [re-released dbt Semantic Layer](/docs/use-dbt-semantic-layer/dbt-sl), powered by MetricFlow, offers enhanced flexibility, performance, and user experience, marking a significant advancement for the dbt community.
 
-### Key changes
+### Key changes and impact
 
-- Legacy Semantic Layer and dbt Metrics will officially be deprecated on December 15th, 2023.
-- MetricFlow has replaced dbt Metrics for the construction of semantic logic. The `dbt_metrics` package will no longer be supported.
-- Exports replaces Materializations. Exports will be available in December or January in dbt Cloud and replaces the previous materializations functionality.
+- **Deprecation date** — The legacy Semantic Layer and dbt Metrics will be officially deprecated on December 15th, 2023.
+- **Replacement** — [MetricFlow](/docs/build/build-metrics-intro) replaces dbt Metrics for defining semantic logic. The `dbt_metrics` package will no longer be supported post-deprecation.
+- **New feature** — Exports replaces the materializations functionality and will be available in dbt Cloud in December or January.
 
-### Actions 
 
-- If you're using the legacy dbt Semantic Layer or dbt Metrics, use the [dbt Semantic Layer migration guide](/guides/sl-migration?step=1) to migrate over to the re-released dbt Semantic Layer.
-- Engage and share feedback with the dbt Labs team and dbt Community slack using channels like [#dbt-cloud-semantic-layer](https://getdbt.slack.com/archives/C046L0VTVR6) and [#dbt-metricflow](https://getdbt.slack.com/archives/C02CCBBBR1D). Or reach out to your dbt Cloud account representative.
-- Refer to some additional info and resources to help you upgrade your dbt version:
+### Breaking changes and recommendations
+
+- For users on dbt version 1.6 and lower with dbt Metrics and Snowflake proxy:
+  - **Impact**: Post-deprecation, queries using the proxy _will not_ run.
+  - **Action required:** _Immediate_ migration is necessary. Refer to the [dbt Semantic Layer migration guide](/guides/sl-migration?step=1)
+
+- For users on dbt version 1.6 and lower using dbt Metrics without Snowflake proxy:
+  - **Impact**: No immediate disruption, but the package will not receive updates or support after deprecation
+  - **Recommendation**: Plan migration to the new Semantic Layer for compatibility with dbt version 1.6 and higher.
+
+### Engage and support
+
+- Feedback and community support — Engage and share feedback with the dbt Labs team and dbt Community slack using channels like [#dbt-cloud-semantic-layer](https://getdbt.slack.com/archives/C046L0VTVR6) and [#dbt-metricflow](https://getdbt.slack.com/archives/C02CCBBBR1D). Or reach out to your dbt Cloud account representative.
+
+- Resources for upgrading —Refer to some additional info and resources to help you upgrade your dbt version:
 
   - [Upgrade version in dbt Cloud](/docs/dbt-versions/upgrade-core-in-cloud)
   - [Version migration guides](/docs/dbt-versions/core-upgrade)