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 	<h2>2024-11-06</h2>
 	<p>October came and went, ideas piled up in notebooks, but I kept on drawing. I knew already by the time had finished with the <a href='pocket_rewriting.html'>Pocket Rewriting</a> zine that I would make a dynamic implementation of it which, by the way, was very well received despite my not having even had a chance of giving away a single one, for folks printed their own and that delighted me.</p>
-	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less programmatically inclined started playing with it right off, but to near anyone with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like, this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
+	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less <i>programmatically inclined</i> started exploring right away, those with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like found this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li>Finished <a href='journal.html'>Drawtober</a>.</li>
 		<li>Released some <a href='aliceffekt.html'>new music</a>.</li>

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 	<h2>2024-11-06</h2>
 	<p>October came and went, ideas piled up in notebooks, but I kept on drawing. I knew already by the time had finished with the <a href='pocket_rewriting.html'>Pocket Rewriting</a> zine that I would make a dynamic implementation of it which, by the way, was very well received despite my not having even had a chance of giving away a single one, for folks printed their own and that delighted me.</p>
-	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less programmatically inclined started playing with it right off, but to near anyone with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like, this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
+	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less <i>programmatically inclined</i> started exploring right away, those with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like found this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li>Finished <a href='journal.html'>Drawtober</a>.</li>
 		<li>Released some <a href='aliceffekt.html'>new music</a>.</li>

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 	<h2>2024-11-06</h2>
 	<p>October came and went, ideas piled up in notebooks, but I kept on drawing. I knew already by the time had finished with the <a href='pocket_rewriting.html'>Pocket Rewriting</a> zine that I would make a dynamic implementation of it which, by the way, was very well received despite my not having even had a chance of giving away a single one, for folks printed their own and that delighted me.</p>
-	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less programmatically inclined started playing with it right off, but to near anyone with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like, this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
+	<p>The past two weeks since the release of the zine are a throwback to the <a href='orca.html'>Orca</a> launch, where the less <i>programmatically inclined</i> started exploring right away, those with preconceptions about what programming is, what it should look and work like found this booklet remains near undecipherable. I think I can help bridge that gap, maybe.</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li>Finished <a href='journal.html'>Drawtober</a>.</li>
 		<li>Released some <a href='aliceffekt.html'>new music</a>.</li>