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Co-authored-by: Loris S. <[email protected]>

rules/S7165/secrets/rule.adoc

@@ -7,11 +7,10 @@ include::../../../shared_content/secrets/rationale.adoc[]
 
 === What is the potential impact?
 
-If attackers gain access to a New Relic API key, they might be able to gain access to inject forged data,
-to retrieve information potentially private or to configure features in New Relic monitoring solutions.
+If attackers gain access to a New Relic API key, they could potentially inject forged data, retrieve sensitive information, or configure features within New Relic monitoring solutions.
 
 Below are some real-world scenarios that illustrate some impacts of an attacker
-exploiting the secret..
+exploiting the secret.
 
 include::../../../shared_content/secrets/impact/data_compromise.adoc[]