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-# How to get your first 5 users (and convert them to customers) 5️⃣📲🥳
+# How to get your first 5 users
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+(and convert them to customers)
 
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 # Let's practice
 
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-1. Cyclist Dashboard App
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-**Acknowledge**: "Hey, saw your biking adventure in Chicago!"
-**Compliment**: "You really know your way around those streets."
-**Ask**: "Hey, there's an app coming up for cyclists to report stuff like blocked lanes. Know any bike buddies who'd wanna check it out?"
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-2. Daily Health Tracker App
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-Acknowledge: "You're nailing that healthy lifestyle, I see!"
-Compliment: "Impressed by how you keep track of everything."
-Ask: "We're working on this health tracking app. Got friends who'd be into trying it?"
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-3. Family Tree Data App
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-Acknowledge: "Loved your throwback family pic the other day!"
-Compliment: "You're the memory keeper of your fam, huh?"
-Ask: "My peeps are making this family tree app. Know anyone who's into family history stuff?"
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-4. Personal Memory Journal App
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-Acknowledge: "Your stories always crack me up."
-Compliment: "You've got a knack for remembering the funniest details."
-Ask: "There's this memory journal app in the works. You or your friends might wanna give it a spin?"
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-5. Product Review Management App
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-Acknowledge: "Your reviews are always spot on."
-Compliment: "You've got an eye for the good stuff."
-Ask: "Hey, there's an app coming for managing reviews. Think it could help you or someone you know?"
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-6. Personalized Language Learning App
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-Acknowledge: "Your language skills are getting awesome!"
-Compliment: "Love how you dive into new languages."
-Ask: "We're building a language app. Know anyone who's into learning new tongues?"
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-7. Gym Timing App
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-Acknowledge: "You're always gym-ready, huh?"
-Compliment: "Admire how you fit workouts into your busy day."
-Ask: "There's this app for finding the best gym times. Maybe useful for your gym rat friends?"
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-8. Student Contact & Schedule Management App
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-Acknowledge: "You're juggling your teaching schedule like a pro."
-Compliment: "You're so organized, it's unreal!"
-Ask: "Know any other teachers who'd love an app to keep student stuff sorted?"
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-9. Archaeological Dig Management App
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-Acknowledge: "Your dig stories are always epic."
-Compliment: "You're like a modern-day Indiana Jones."
-Ask: "We're cooking up an app for dig management. Got any archaeologist pals who might dig it?"
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-10. Beauty Product Price Comparison App (Prettiest Price)
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-Acknowledge: "You always find great deals on beauty stuff."
-Compliment: "You're the queen of savvy shopping!"
-Ask: "Heard of Prettiest Price? It's for comparing prices. Sounds up your alley, or maybe a friend's?"
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-11. Fighter & Event Connection Web App
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-Acknowledge: "You're really into the fight scene, aren't you?"
-Compliment: "You always know the best events coming up."
-Ask: "There's this app linking fighters and viewers with events. Know folks who'd love that?"
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-12. Kids' Activity & Habit Building App
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-Acknowledge: "You're doing great keeping the kids entertained."
-Compliment: "You've got this parenting thing down."
-Ask: "There's an app for kids' activities and habits. Sounds like something your parent friends might like?"
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-13. Muse - Customer-Driven Shopping App
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-Acknowledge: "I've noticed you're all about finding the best deals and specific items."
-Compliment: "Your knack for shopping efficiently is impressive."
-Ask: "Muse is an app where you list what you want, and sellers come to you with offers. Know anyone who loves shopping smartly like you do?"
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-14. IT Exam Practice Application
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-Acknowledge: "Saw your post about acing your last certification exam!"
-Compliment: "Your dedication to your IT career is truly inspiring."
-Ask: "We're developing an app for IT exam prep. Got friends aiming for certifications who might want in?"
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-15. Gym Scheduling App
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-Acknowledge: "You're always at the gym at the perfect times."
-Compliment: "Admire your commitment to staying fit without the crowds."
-Ask: "There's an app in the works for scheduling gym visits efficiently. Could this be a game-changer for your fitness circle?"
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-16. Health Data Tracking App
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-Acknowledge: "Your health transformation journey has been amazing to watch."
-Compliment: "You’ve mastered the art of monitoring your health metrics."
-Ask: "We're fine-tuning a health data app. Know anyone passionate about personal health insights?"
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-17. Public Restroom Finder Web-App
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-Acknowledge: "Remember when you were looking for a restroom that one time at the park?"
-Compliment: "You always plan ahead, which is so smart."
-Ask: "We're creating a restroom finder app with accessibility info. Think it could help you or someone else on the go?"
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-18. Beginner-Friendly Stock Trading App
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-Acknowledge: "Noticed you've been getting into investing lately."
-Compliment: "It's cool how you're exploring the stock market."
-Ask: "There's an app geared towards beginners in stock trading. Maybe useful for you or a friend just starting out?"
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-19. Bird Identification Image Classification App
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-Acknowledge: "Loved your recent birdwatching photos!"
-Compliment: "You have an eye for spotting the rarest birds."
-Ask: "There's an app coming that identifies birds from photos. Think you or your birdwatching buddies might find it handy?"
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-20. Group Organization Application
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-Acknowledge: "Your family outings are always so well organized."
-Compliment: "You're a pro at keeping everyone on the same page."
-Ask: "We're working on an app to help groups stay organized. Know any other organizers who'd love a tool like this?"
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-21. Job Tracking Management for Job Seekers
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-Acknowledge: "You've been nailing the job hunt lately."
-Compliment: "Your method of tracking applications is on point."
-Ask: "There's an app in development for managing job applications. Could this be a lifesaver for your job-seeking friends?"
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-22. Credit Card Maximization Application
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-Acknowledge: "I admire how you maximize every credit card reward."
-Compliment: "Your financial savvy is next level."
-Ask: "We're creating an app to optimize credit card rewards based on spending. Think it could enhance your strategy?"
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+<!-- Practice pitching your projects using ACA framework -->
 
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@@ -269,7 +134,7 @@ These "customers" are not paying you money, but they are paying for your service
 
 (this is your first app and you don't know what you're doing so 5 is plenty)
 
->I just had a girl named (xxx) work with me to get (dream outcome) even though she (describe struggle).
+>I just had a user named (xxx) work with me to get (dream outcome) even though she (describe struggle).
 >I'd like to get more testimonials to show it works across different scenarios.
 >Does anyone you know come to mind?