Initial editorial suggestions from T. Taft #1147
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Thanks Tucker! These are all very helpful.
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Use subjunctive: ... as if it is ... => ... as if it were ...
Various editorial suggestions from T. Taft.
I found the use of "Enclosing" as a type name confusing, and so suggested replaceing "Enclosing" with "Device" and then using "Encloser" rather than "Instance" as the discriminant name. I also think the discussion of immutably limited, aliasedness, etc., is probably more than necessary, and was a bit imprecise in various ways. I have made some fixes, but I think you could probably simplify the whole discussion without losing much.
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Here are some editorial suggestions for the Ada Idioms course. I have reviewed about six of the idioms.