Peer Review - Xiang Zhang

[zhangxiang0822]

Good research with an interesting hypothesis, and well-organized poster!

The design of poster: Look pretty good to me

• The poster contains an introduction part, which helps me get familiar with the research topics with sufficient backgrounds.
• The poster contains several descriptive graphs. The graphs serve as the motivation of the research and also give me a sense of the why the government propose definition of "zaolian".
• The poster has a regression results part. The author estimates the coefficient and shows that therle does exist some correlation. Also, further regression analysis makes clear through which possible channels we have more TV series (if I remember correct).
• We have a fianl conclusion part, which makes the results clearer, and summarizes the main findnigs of the research.

The color scheme and layout of the poster looks good to me. It makes people fell comfortable. Also, the number of equations/graphs are just right! With visualization, we can see the pattern clearer.

On results, the author uses a VAR model to study the correlational relationship. We can see hte results clearly from the poster. Also, I can see that threr are some channel exploration, which is good.