Peer Review - Yangyang Dai

[yyd007]

This is a very interesting topic and a new perspective that could potentially lead to many other political research topics in China.

Overall design/layout:
I think the four columns in blue squares are very clear, and the bold titles are clear in order to show the different sections. People can easily understand which part shows what analysis or results.

Visualization:
I like the heavy usage of graphs, it visualizes well and easy to read instead of long paragraphs. My personal opinion is that it would be more informative if Yilun could put some explanation to the results and model section, so that people who don’t have previous knowledge about the models and methods can understand better.

Content:
I think the content is pretty interesting. Yilun talked about the reasons why Chinese government became more tolerant to Zaolian this recent years. Movie and TV impact, low fertility rate and postponed marriage age are all good reasons. I am also curious about the effect of education that could potentially played in this part. That might be a suggestion for future study.

Overall, I like your presentation and thank you for your effort!