From 49c6ca6b45b858237b273faf6840133ee3fbe327 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Palmer <24211477+ThatAlexPalmer@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 14 Oct 2023 10:50:10 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Improve copy

---
 src/components/wrappers.tsx |  7 +++++--
 src/pages/index.tsx         | 13 +++++++------
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/wrappers.tsx b/src/components/wrappers.tsx
index b4475ea..0909e6a 100644
--- a/src/components/wrappers.tsx
+++ b/src/components/wrappers.tsx
@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@ const Nav = styled.nav`
 	align-items: center;
 	width: 100%;
 	max-width: 768px;
+	padding: 1rem 0;
 `;
 
 const Logotype = styled.span`
@@ -113,6 +114,7 @@ const Credits = styled.div`
 	justify-content: flex-start;
 	align-items: flex-start;
 	font-size: ${({ theme }) => theme.fontSizes.large};
+	margin-bottom: 4rem;
 
 	a, span {
         padding: 0 1rem 0 0;
@@ -135,6 +137,7 @@ const TallyWrapper = styled.div`
     flex-direction: column;
     align-items: center;
     justify-content: center;
+	padding: 2px;
     width: 100%;
     height: 100%;
 `;
@@ -146,7 +149,7 @@ const FooterWrapper = styled.footer`
    	align-items: flext-start;
     align-self: center;
     justify-content: flex-start;
-    margin: 8rem 0 4rem 0;
+    margin: 4rem auto;
 `;
 
 const FooterContent = styled.div`
@@ -155,7 +158,7 @@ const FooterContent = styled.div`
 	justify-content: flex-start;
 	align-items: flex-start;
 	width: 100%;
-	margin: 0 0 0 2.7rem;
+	margin: 0 auto;
 `;
 
 const FooterAside = styled.aside`
diff --git a/src/pages/index.tsx b/src/pages/index.tsx
index 1ce36a8..1f4365f 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.tsx
+++ b/src/pages/index.tsx
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ import { H1, H2, Blockquote, P } from "../components/typography";
 
 const TallyStyles = {
 	width: "100%",
-	height: "61.8vh",
+	height: "61.8rem",
 	marginHeight: 0,
 	marginWidth: 0,
 	frameBorder: 0,
@@ -15,11 +15,14 @@ export default function Home() {
 	return (
 		<Content>
 			<Heading>
-				<H1>Open source onramp for in-demand RWAs</H1>
+				<H1>Onchain equity protocol.</H1>
+				<P>Onramp for in-demand tokenized real world assets.</P>
+				<P>Permissionless. Open source. Compliant with transfer agent regulation in the US.</P>
 			</Heading>
 			<Blockquote>
 				<P>Crypto deserves <mark>compliant infrastructure</mark> for <mark>tokenized capital markets</mark>. We believe it must be truly open, free, and user-centric.</P>
-				<P>Introducing an <mark>open source protocol stack</mark> to build web3 equivalents of transfer agents. This infra lets you <mark>mint performant equity cap tables onchain</mark>.</P>
+				<P>Introducing an <mark>open source onchain equity protocol</mark> to build web3 equivalents of transfer agents.</P>
+				<P>This infra lets you mint performant <mark>equity cap tables</mark> onchain.</P>
 				<a href="https://paragraph.xyz/@poetnetworkhq/rwa-tokenization-protocol-stack" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Read the full announcement</a>
 			</Blockquote>
 			<H2>
@@ -45,9 +48,7 @@ export default function Home() {
 						console.log("Tally failed to load");
 					}}
 				/>
-				<TallyWrapper>
-					<iframe data-tally-src="https://tally.so/r/w2aGPD?alignLeft=1&hideTitle=1&transparentBackground=1&dynamicHeight=1" loading="lazy" style={TallyStyles} title="Build with us"></iframe>
-				</TallyWrapper>
+				<iframe data-tally-src="https://tally.so/r/w2aGPD?alignLeft=1&hideTitle=1&transparentBackground=1&dynamicHeight=1" loading="lazy" style={TallyStyles} title="Build with us"></iframe>
 			</TallyWrapper>
 		</Content>
 	);