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 # mia workshop in EuroBioC2024 <img src="vignettes/figures/mia_logo.png" align="right" width="120" />
 
-This workshop introduces the miaverse framework, a powerful tool within the
-_SummarizedExperiment_ framework designed specifically for microbiome data
-science. Participants will gain hands-on experience with the
+This workshop introduces the _miaverse_, a _SummarizedExperiment_
+framework tailored for microbiome data science. Participants will gain
+hands-on experience with the
 _TreeSummarizedExperiment_ class, which is central to the _miaverse_
-framework. The session will also cover how to utilize the methods available
+framework. In this session, we will also learn how to utilize _miaverse_ methods
 and navigate the
 [Orchestrating Microbiome Analysis (OMA) online book](https://microbiome.github.io/OMA/docs/devel/)
-for additional resources.
+for additional resource.
 
 We will start with a brief overview of the framework, followed by an
 instructor-led live demonstration. The demonstration will showcase selected
 key features and functionalities of miaverse. After the demo, participant
-will have time to discuss the framework, ask questions, and explore the tool
+will have time to discuss the framework, ask questions, and explore the tools
 and methods covered.
 
 By the end of the workshop, attendees will have a understanding of how to
-apply the miaverse framework to their microbiome data analysis and will be
+apply the miaverse framework to their microbiome research and will be
 well-prepared to further explore the framework independently.