Onboarding Copy

[emcruer]

What feature would you like to see added (e.g. "I'd like to view more cities")? Why would that feature be useful to you or other people? And finally, do you have any suggestions on how the feature should look or work? The more info, the better!

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Perhaps add a little more information - on-boarding copy - about what city AQ does, how and why!

1). Welcome to cityAQ!
Our mission is to provide open data about air quality in cities all over the world in order to fight pollution and impact policy. Use the search bar above to find and compare cities.

• Could also add in the other features here, too, when they're available. Like, "find and compare cities, set alerts and monitor changes." Something along those lines :)

2). Detailed Data
We use public data sources and make the information more universally accessible. You'll be able to see the overall air quality index (AQI) for each city, as well as the concentrations for each individual pollutant. To learn more about what these pollutants are, check out our Information Page.

• If you wanted to make a sort of Glossary/Information Page, you could link to something that gives a brief background on the pollutants and even relevant info as to what's causing them. Ex. "NO2 (Nitrogen Dioxide) is a gas caused by the burning of fossil fuels and is mainly caused by motor vehicles."

3). AQI Explanation
The number you see to the left is the Air Quality Index. It tells you how clean or polluted the air is and if there are any associated health concerns.

4). Dig Deeper
For more information, as well as detailed maps and charts, visit the OpenAQ site and join our community.

Definitely throw out anything you don't like :), but thought it might provide a little more context for a new visitor!

[jackkoppa]

These are perfect, thank you!

If you don't mind, I'll add you as a reviewer when I make these changes, and you'll be able to easily compare current vs. proposed changes

[emcruer]

Sure! I'd be happy to help.

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