Election example not clear

[pgodfrin-nov]

Howdy - perhaps the doc could define what the arguments mean? What is "one" and what is "p1" and "p2"??

[jmhbnz]

Hey @pgodfrin-nov - Thanks for raising this suggestion, can you please confirm which page you're referring to? Thanks!

[pgodfrin-nov]

Hey @pgodfrin-nov - Thanks for raising this suggestion, can you please confirm which page you're referring to? Thanks!

Certainly, not sure why I didn't in the first place...
https://etcd.io/docs/v3.5/tutorials/how-to-conduct-elections/

[Shubhdeep02]

Hey @jmhbnz i would like to work on this issue..

[jmhbnz]

Hey @jmhbnz i would like to work on this issue..

Awesome - thanks!

/assign @Shubhdeep02

[Shubhdeep02]

hey @jmhbnz should i add a complete block of how notation are given and used or just refactor it by adding comments?

[jmhbnz]

hey @jmhbnz should i add a complete block of how notation are given and used or just refactor it by adding comments?

I would suggest rewriting the page to remove the current .gif image and replace it with step by step instructions. The gif does not work with screen readers etc and may go to fast to be clearly understood.

[Shubhdeep02]

@jmhbnz i have raised the pr in #867 . Can you please review it?