From 8600ffb5d6c31cb77885c28fb44f7deae14cf667 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Matt Shaver <60105315+matthewshaver@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 25 Sep 2024 18:28:22 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Ly Nguyen <107218380+nghi-ly@users.noreply.github.com>
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 .../reference/global-configs/adapter-behavior-changes.md  | 2 +-
 website/docs/reference/global-configs/redshift-changes.md | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/docs/reference/global-configs/adapter-behavior-changes.md b/website/docs/reference/global-configs/adapter-behavior-changes.md
index fb560151701..bd0ba9f7404 100644
--- a/website/docs/reference/global-configs/adapter-behavior-changes.md
+++ b/website/docs/reference/global-configs/adapter-behavior-changes.md
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ pagination_prev: null
 ---
 
 
-Some adapters may show behavior changes when certain flags are enabled. Refer to the following sections for each respective adapter.
+Some adapters can display behavior changes when certain flags are enabled. The following sections contain details about these adapter-specific behavior changes. 
 
 
 <div className="grid--3-col">
diff --git a/website/docs/reference/global-configs/redshift-changes.md b/website/docs/reference/global-configs/redshift-changes.md
index 67404f97fb3..2ba7c0f165f 100644
--- a/website/docs/reference/global-configs/redshift-changes.md
+++ b/website/docs/reference/global-configs/redshift-changes.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
-title: "Redshift adapter behavior changes"
+title: "Amazon Redshift adapter behavior changes"
 id: "redshift-changes"
 sidebar: "Redshift"
 ---
 
-## restrict_direct_pg_catalog_access
+## The restrict_direct_pg_catalog_access flag
 
-Originally, the `dbt-redshift` adapter was built on top of the `dbt-postgres` adapter and used Postgres tables for metadata access. With this flag enabled, the adapter will use the Redshift API (through the Python client) if available, or query Redshift's `information_schema` tables instead of using `pg_` tables.
+Originally, the `dbt-redshift` adapter was built on top of the `dbt-postgres` adapter and used Postgres tables for metadata access. When this flag is enabled, the adapter uses the Redshift API (through the Python client) if available, or queries Redshift's `information_schema` tables instead of using the `pg_` tables.
 
-While we don't expect any user-noticeable behavior changes due to this change, out of caution we are gating it behind a behavior-change flag and encouraging users to test it before it becomes the default for everyone.
+While you shouldn't notice any behavior changes due to this change, however, to be cautious dbt Labs is gating it behind a behavior-change flag and encouraging you to test it before it becoming the default.