From fbc89560830d399cf42f7801dca6e9c5570902ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Danilo Leal <67129314+danilo-leal@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 27 Nov 2023 20:08:31 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] Sam's copywriting review

---
 .../components/productMaterial/MaterialTemplates.tsx |  2 +-
 docs/src/components/productX/XComponents.tsx         |  4 ++--
 docs/src/components/productX/XComponentsSwitcher.tsx | 12 ++++++------
 docs/src/components/productX/XDataGrid.tsx           |  2 +-
 docs/src/components/productX/XPlans.tsx              |  2 +-
 docs/src/components/productX/XRoadmap.tsx            |  2 +-
 docs/src/components/productX/XTheming.tsx            |  4 ++--
 7 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/src/components/productMaterial/MaterialTemplates.tsx b/docs/src/components/productMaterial/MaterialTemplates.tsx
index 9a5b23da24407e..e53b1e2144d26a 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productMaterial/MaterialTemplates.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productMaterial/MaterialTemplates.tsx
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ export default function MaterialTemplates() {
             <br /> <GradientText>specific use case</GradientText>
           </Typography>
         }
-        description="A collection of 4.5 average rating templates, for multiple use cases, all powered by Material UI components and carefully curated by MUI's team."
+        description="A carefully curated collection of gorgeous, fully functional templates, all powered by Material UI."
       />
       <Group rowLayout desktopColumns={2} sx={{ mt: 3 }}>
         {DEMOS.map((name) => (
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XComponents.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XComponents.tsx
index 7ffdd54f782ee2..6d302d4ed304bc 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XComponents.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XComponents.tsx
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ export default function XComponents() {
             overline="Advanced React component library"
             title={
               <Typography variant="h2">
-                Powerful components for <GradientText>advanced use-cases</GradientText>
+                Powerful components for <GradientText>advanced use cases</GradientText>
               </Typography>
             }
-            description="The MUI X packages enable applications to have complex use-cases, supported by several advanced components."
+            description="The MUI X packages can power complex and data-intensive applications across a wide spectrum of use cases."
           />
           <XComponentsSwitcher
             componentIndex={componentIndex}
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XComponentsSwitcher.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XComponentsSwitcher.tsx
index 1c8466213b9291..0aed766b99698d 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XComponentsSwitcher.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XComponentsSwitcher.tsx
@@ -96,22 +96,22 @@ export default function XComponentsSwitcher(props: {
   const componentElement = [
     <ComponentItem
       name="Data Grid"
-      label="Feature-rich and fast table extension."
-      description="Feature-rich and fast table extension."
+      label="Fast, feature-rich data table."
+      description="Fast, feature-rich data table."
       icon={<PivotTableChartRoundedIcon />}
       href={ROUTES.dataGridOverview}
     />,
     <ComponentItem
       name="Date and Time Pickers"
-      description="Let users pick a date and time, or both together."
-      label="Let users pick a date and time, or both together."
+      description="A suite of components for selecting dates, times, and ranges."
+      label="A suite of components for selecting dates, times, and ranges."
       icon={<CalendarMonthRoundedIcon />}
       href={ROUTES.datePickersOverview}
     />,
     <ComponentItem
       name="Charts"
-      description="Features bar, line, pie, scatter, and more types of graphs."
-      label="Features bar, line, pie, scatter, and more types of graphs."
+      description="A collection of data visualization graphs, including bar, line, pie, scatter, and more."
+      label="A collection of data visualization graphs, including bar, line, pie, scatter, and more."
       icon={<BarChartRoundedIcon />}
       href={ROUTES.chartsOverview}
     />,
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XDataGrid.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XDataGrid.tsx
index 203914b5a89ece..d2b7ea78b4b10e 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XDataGrid.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XDataGrid.tsx
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ export default function XDataGrid() {
                     </Typography>
                     <Typography color="grey.300" variant="body2">
                       The Data Grid and all other MUI X components are available on free and paid
-                      versions. More details about each plan and its features are on{' '}
+                      plans. Find more details about each plan and its features are on{' '}
                       <Link href={ROUTES.pricing}>the pricing page</Link>.
                     </Typography>
                   </React.Fragment>
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XPlans.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XPlans.tsx
index e18fbf22477a81..c0034732bca2b2 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XPlans.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XPlans.tsx
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ const content = [
     icon: <IconImage name="pricing/x-plan-premium" mode="" loading="eager" />,
     title: 'Premium plan',
     description:
-      'Every advanced feature of every component, such as row grouping and Excel export, for the Data Grid, plus what is included in the Pro plan.',
+      'The most advanced features for every component, including row grouping and Excel export for the Data Grid, plus everything included in the Pro plan.',
   },
 ];
 
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XRoadmap.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XRoadmap.tsx
index c4eec906a656a6..95fe69f3e99783 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XRoadmap.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XRoadmap.tsx
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ export default function XRoadmap() {
                 Follow the <GradientText>MUI X roadmap</GradientText> for future updates
               </Typography>
             }
-            description="It's just the beginning for the MUI X components. Stay tuned for the exciting news and updates coming soon!"
+            description="It's just the beginning for the MUI X components. Stay tuned for exciting news and updates coming soon!"
           />
           <Button
             component={Link}
diff --git a/docs/src/components/productX/XTheming.tsx b/docs/src/components/productX/XTheming.tsx
index 633ba8e15be295..2038b5b30428f9 100644
--- a/docs/src/components/productX/XTheming.tsx
+++ b/docs/src/components/productX/XTheming.tsx
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ export default function XTheming() {
                 Advanced and <GradientText>beautiful</GradientText>
               </Typography>
             }
-            description="Use the sophisticated theming features to make the MUI X components look exactly as you want. Take this Data Grid as example."
+            description="Use sophisticated theming features to make the MUI X components look exactly how you want. Take this Data Grid as an example."
           />
           <Group sx={{ m: -2, p: 2 }}>
             <Highlighter disableBorder selected={customized} onClick={() => setCustomized(true)}>
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ export default function XTheming() {
               <Item
                 icon={<SvgMaterialDesign />}
                 title="Material Design"
-                description="Every component comes with Google's tried and tested design system built-in ready for use."
+                description="Every component comes with Google's tried-and-tested design system, built-in and ready for use."
               />
             </Highlighter>
           </Group>