From 9170c94a1b7c2e73aea88f65e603611a18e17c0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BurkHufnagel
Date: Sat, 27 Oct 2018 13:11:11 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Fixed some grammar issues in the README.md file so it
reads better.
---
README.md | 38 +++++++++++++++++++-------------------
1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 289c147..02bbbfd 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -7,14 +7,14 @@ Feature Toggles
-This is an example of feature toggle techniques usage, so here we'll focus
-more on the category of **Release toggles**.
-We also wrote a blog post called **Release your Software anytime**. [Check it out!](https://pragma.team/blog-list/2017/4/24/release-your-software-anytime)
+Example of using feature techniques at Application level, so here we'll focus
+more on the category of [Release
+toggles](https://martinfowler.com/articles/feature-toggles.html#ReleaseToggles).
## The process of toggling
In order to make every commit production ready, feature toggle is one of the
-techniques that allow in-progress features to be checked in while still allows
+techniques that allow in-progress features to be checked in while still allowing
that codebase to be deployed to production at any time. It also means that we're
separating **release** from **deploy**.
@@ -23,18 +23,18 @@ _feature toggle during the release process_
Step-by-step:
-* Toggle **OFF**, start to commit/push your changes
+* Toggle **OFF**, then commit/push your changes
* Release it, test it (e.g.: different environments, limit range of users)
-* Then you can toggle **ON**
+* Then set the toggle to **ON**
* If you notice a critical bug or some unexpected behaviour, instead of
- rollback or revert all the things, consider rollforward, turn the feature off
+ a rollback or reverting all the changes, consider a rollforward, turn the feature off
and take your time to fix it.
* Once you are happy with your feature in place, remember to **recycle** the toggle.
The usage of feature toggle requires a lot of discipline and must be used
carefully. You might end up with toggles of toggles or you could be in a
situation where you just don’t know where else that toggle has being used, so
-you’ll never deleted it. Be mindful that you can work without it, using
+you’ll never completely delete it. Be mindful that you can work without it, using
different techniques like [Branch by
Abstraction](https://medium.com/r/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmartinfowler.com%2Fbliki%2FBranchByAbstraction.html)
that enables you gradually make changes in a total decoupled code which also have
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ the benefit of separation of concerns, making easy to maintain.
### The example of heart monitor
-This repository use as an example the heart monitor, which is a quite simple way
+This repository uses as an example the heart monitor, which is a quite simple way
to describe a few new requirements in order to simulate how would we apply
feature toggling at the application level. It's organized by branches, so
the [master branch](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles) will contain
@@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ the final state and you can travel in time through the branches
You can also keep track of the feature toggling journey through the
[commits](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles/commits/master).
-You can learn with more details how [cardiac monitoring
+You can learn more details about how [cardiac monitoring
works](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cardiac_monitoring) but on this example
we'll over simplify what it is. Imagine that our software collects signals over
time, and every minute the machine sends a signal value that our software will
-evaluate it and plot a chart, like on the image below:
+evaluate and plot on a chart, like on the image below:
![alt heartmonitor](heart-monitor.png)
_heart monitor example_
@@ -64,27 +64,27 @@ _heart monitor example_
### [Feature #1 - Heart beating status](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles/tree/feature%231)
- Given a collection of cardiac pulses as signals are available
-- When the monitor evaluates certain amount of time series data
-- Then it should send a message weather the heart has stopped or it's still beating
+- When the monitor evaluates a certain amount of time series data
+- Then it should send a message indicating whether the heart has stopped or is still beating
Example:
-1. If the line is flat (all signals remains 0), the status will indicate that the heart has stopped.
-2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status will indicate that the heart is still beating.
+1. If the line is flat (all signals remains 0), the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
+2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
This code is also available on the branch [feature#1](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles/tree/feature%231).
### [Feature #2 - Heart beating status](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles/tree/feature%232)
- Given a collection of cardiac pulses as signals are available
-- When the monitor evaluates certain amount of time series data
+- When the monitor evaluates a certain amount of time series data
- And all signals remains the same
- Then the heart beating status should be **stopped**
Example:
-1. If the line is flat (all signals remains the same), the status will indicate that the heart has stopped.
-2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status will indicate that the heart is still beating.
+1. If the line is flat (all signals remains the same), the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
+2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
![alt heartmonitor-2](heart-monitor-2.png)
_heart monitor example_
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ The following features will be described here in the future.
* Describe new features
* Add new code that satisfies the new requirements using feature toggles
- * Use different branches to illustrate how it would look like in a real scenario.
+ * Use different branches to illustrate what it would look like in a real scenario.
## Setup
From 70b780325ddb8b00c4fd47f21078651912f3c6b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BurkHufnagel
Date: Sat, 27 Oct 2018 13:16:18 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Fixed some grammar issues in the README.md file so it
reads better.
---
README.md | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 02bbbfd..c80bb32 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ _heart monitor example_
Example:
-1. If the line is flat (all signals remains 0), the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
-2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
+1. If the line is flat (all signals remains 0), then the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
+2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values, then the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
This code is also available on the branch [feature#1](https://github.com/Pragmateam/feature-toggles/tree/feature%231).
@@ -83,8 +83,8 @@ This code is also available on the branch [feature#1](https://github.com/Pragmat
Example:
-1. If the line is flat (all signals remains the same), the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
-2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
+1. If the line is flat (all signals remains the same), then the status should indicate that the heart has stopped.
+2. If all signals varies with higher/lower values, then the status should indicate that the heart is still beating.
![alt heartmonitor-2](heart-monitor-2.png)
_heart monitor example_