From a64cdf1dcc7a5f78ad10c58c0e896fd567700895 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wern Date: Tue, 14 Nov 2023 01:07:20 +0800 Subject: [PATCH] Fix UG phrasing --- docs/UserGuide.md | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/UserGuide.md b/docs/UserGuide.md index f8ddba1d689..3a4aa370d6a 100644 --- a/docs/UserGuide.md +++ b/docs/UserGuide.md @@ -147,10 +147,10 @@ Solid! Now it's time to get started with Jobby! ### Adding your first Organization -Let's say you are interested to applying to **Google** as your internship destination, and you found their email **google@gmail.com**. +Let's say you are interested to apply to **Google** as your internship destination, and you found their email **google@gmail.com**. (This is not their real email, of course) -You can use [`add --org`{:.language-sh}](#adding-organizations---add---org) command here to add Google into your organization: +You can use [`add --org`{:.language-sh}](#adding-organizations---add---org) to add the Google organization in Jobby: 1. Type `add --org --name Google --id google_id --email google@gmail.com`{:.language-sh} into the command box 2. Press **ENTER** @@ -163,19 +163,19 @@ You have successfully added **Google**, with the email **google@gmail.com** into In a job fair, you managed to meet a **Google** internship recruiter, **Josh Mao**, and he provided you with his number **91219121**. -Here is how you can use [`add --rec`{:.language-sh}](#adding-recruiters---add---rec) command to track the Recruiter data in Jobby: +Here is how you can use [`add --rec`{:.language-sh}](#adding-recruiters---add---rec) to record the recruiter in Jobby: 1. Type `add --rec --name Josh Mao --oid google_id --phone 91219121`{:.language-sh} into the command box 2. Press **ENTER** ![Adding Recruiter](images/ug-images/rec-added.png) -You have successfully added **Josh Mao**, who is a **recruiter** from Google, whose number is **91219121**. +You have successfully added **Josh Mao** - a **recruiter** from Google with the phone number **91219121**. ### Adding your first Application After preparing your resume, you are ready to apply to **Google** as an intern for their **Software Engineer** role! And you know that the application deadline is on the **22-11-2023**. -Here is how you can use [`apply`](#applying-to-organizations---apply) command to track your application in Jobby: +Here is how you can use [`apply`](#applying-to-organizations---apply) to track your application in Jobby: 1. Type `apply google_id --title Software Engineer --by 22-11-2023`{:.language-sh} into the command box 2. Press **ENTER** @@ -183,9 +183,9 @@ Here is how you can use [`apply`](#applying-to-organizations---apply) command to You have successfully added your job application to **Google**! -**Congratulations!** You have run through the basics of Jobby. We hope that this tutorial has given you an understanding of the -basic workflow of Jobby. However, there are still many features that we have yet introduced. Please refer to the [Using Jobby](#using-jobby) section to understand -Jobby's command structures, or visit the [Features](#features) section to see the full capabilities of Jobby! +**Congratulations!** You have run through the basics of Jobby. We hope that this tutorial has given you an understanding of a basic workflow in Jobby. +However, there are still many features that we have yet to introduce. Please refer to the [Using Jobby](#using-jobby) section to understand how to interpret +command structures and formats, or visit the [Features](#features) section to see the full capabilities of Jobby! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------